Critiques Welcome

@pardis2001 thanks!!

@AllAboutGay I'm glad it did, gay Glad indeed

@OnlyChild_Boi aye, thanks

send the book to roblox queen, she’ll help ️

@mr_peanut Yea. So go back. You are not the guy I am looking for. Thanks.

@obviouslylucifer Ughhhh I love my mother(s) too @WtfJudith

@odin

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@yoursbucky i am waiting your poems, i love literacy and poetry

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@sup I'm very glad you understand it bruv

@sup you like it? I'm 50/50 on that one

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Deep mind Deep thinking Nice story keep it up

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Thank you so much @us-poet

@hydar it's a round robin. There's still time for you to get in on it if you like, just let me know if you want a section.

@azriel it's never too late to enjoy it. Read at your leisure, as we're writing it that way, heheh.