@Eucalyptus my analyzation wouldnt be accurate but I think she's sorrowful abt how she want and capable of giving back more than she had been given but still finding a mistyrious excuse to not do so .. maybe cause she feels full of emotions that wont be interpreted well by others . I hope I knew something 😕
What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
