I have long been looking for such a post.

probably just thought it would be interesting to do the same in a different manner

@AXES thx lol u are too

@Jess :smirk:

https://chatrooms.talkwithstranger.com/topic/67614/dreamers-of-dreams-ch-one-writer-s-workshop

Well its kinda well-written tbh, at least better than mine

Do u wanna chat?

What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!

I read the whole of ur point.
Life is unpredictable,u never knoe what next card will show.Their comes a point when u dont like anyone because the person whom u love the most,done everything to make them close to u ..leaves u.At that very moment u knoe u ll be in depression and definitely u ll think u wanna suicide.But suicide is only not the option.
I got a relation we talk but things are not at all same,One who was who is and who ll be in my priority list found me irritating.All i could do is walk away from her life and leave her alone promising in my mind i m always for her,i cant be pysically available as she ll found more irritating but can be my prayers ll work here for her.
People reading the post will found me fool i knoe but if u trully love someone she is thier or not doesnt matter but u will always be their for her

@pe7erpark3r Ah yeah well it's not a story so why use paragraphs? And don't believe in God but thankss

@Matt_Aranha Thank you

@Lazz I can tell

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@Wicked_
have you ever had a kiss
that took you on a bliss
and left you with shaking knees
the one you'd not dare miss

so intense it made you drift
a fall you'd not care lift
and your lot that is to shift
seems to budge in a swift

lose a grip, never a bit
those lips they seem to fit
and with less than a heartbeat
your souls are apt to meet

@Cosmic_Lady Raise you up fall for you so long as I’m with you I’ll be happy

"). The bomb

Is this still up? I can be of help!

@Wicked_ you would never lose yourself , never

Beautiful. What a imaginations... I love it... :tada:

@Wicked_ i bet everyone whoever will read these lines can connect themselves from their incidents and thier experiences of life..that's the art you know