What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!

@Matt_Aranha Thank you

@Lazz I can tell

@Emma-Bradley keep being strong

@chewie

Damn chewie... now that ain't right lol

Hii...u wannna talk to me come on

@Wicked_ there's no such thing as God ... I'll be ur demon to save u from hell

@SoulBrother I know and I appreciate that. But this was posted a day ago.

@Sassygirl Thanks I really appreciate it. I'm the lucky on tbh. She is so amazing I don't think of myself as hardly worthy of her.

@chewie I’m glad you liked this one. I wrote it cause it was inspired by Nia. She’s been one person that’s always been there for me since I met her. No matter how depressed angry or upset I am she can literally put a smile on my face and make my day better.

@chewie Writing is my life line. Without it I’d sink into the dark depths of my life. I wrote to get my emotions out for poetry. With stories I let my muse sing

@Matt_Aranha I’m glad you enjoyed the piece.

@Karenluvsjesus Takes two to carry on. Lose one and it’s over.

@mchr That was amazing. You’ve got talent and you can definitely sing. I loved it

@Varun-Kadam that’s very good.