@Wicked_ can i come along? Sounds idyllic! I know some perfect mountains, takes your breath away, standing at the foot of them makes you realise how insignificant you are, looking out from the top of them makes you feel so privileged
You're a benefit to humanity
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@thestrangest What about "You are not a threat to the society" because that one does sound better but they aren't gonna understand what this is about... kinda
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@fearlesswoman said in Suicide is not an option:
@thestrangest What about "You are not a threat to the society"
I don't think that many people out of the number of people who want to kill themselves believe they're a threat to society though but let's not focus on this line, let's focus on the 3 other lines i said were just in bad taste, if you want to
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@thestrangest What about now?
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1-"Just give a break to you and your anxiety"
This sux because you need professional help 99% of the time to stop chronic anxiety
2-"Don't let your soul be depressed"
If you have depression(ACTUAL depression, not just feeling down for a couple of days, DEPRESSION resulting from chemical imbalances in the brain) you need professional help and can't just decide to stop being depressed
3-""I'm stupid" should be written on your shirt"
I don't think that would fucking help, because they're not stupid, and it's stupid of you to say that they're acting stupid
4-"thank god you are the one blessed"
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@fearlesswoman nothing wrong with that. Keep up the good work, and let's hear you sing this, well at least let me hear you sing this.
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@us-poet said in You're a benefit to humanity:
@fearlesswoman nothing wrong with that. Keep up the good work, and let's hear you sing this, well at least let me hear you sing this.
I'd like so too but most importantly I'd like to see it revisited, reviewed and edited
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@FearlessWoman This is great. :smiling_face_with_heart-eyes: :smiling_face_with_heart-eyes:
It's a great display of your talent as well as feelings & emotion.
I can think of no better way to spread your beliefs in this matter.
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This is very beautifully written buddy.
Thank you for sharing.
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@thestrangest And I'd like to see your response on that
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@us-poet Sure! :D
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@evan-elderson Thank you so much for this!
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@stranger_danger And your compliments have touched me! Thank you :smiling_face_with_heart-eyes:
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@sammy And thank YOU for the response! <3
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@fearlesswoman said in You're a benefit to humanity:
@thestrangest And I'd like to see your response on that
My response on what?
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I absolutely agree tbh
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@thestrangest revisited, reviewed and edited version of this one
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@fearlesswoman tell me when you're done with it
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@thestrangest Sure!