I read the whole of ur point.
Life is unpredictable,u never knoe what next card will show.Their comes a point when u dont like anyone because the person whom u love the most,done everything to make them close to u ..leaves u.At that very moment u knoe u ll be in depression and definitely u ll think u wanna suicide.But suicide is only not the option.
I got a relation we talk but things are not at all same,One who was who is and who ll be in my priority list found me irritating.All i could do is walk away from her life and leave her alone promising in my mind i m always for her,i cant be pysically available as she ll found more irritating but can be my prayers ll work here for her.
People reading the post will found me fool i knoe but if u trully love someone she is thier or not doesnt matter but u will always be their for her
You're a benefit to humanity
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@fearlesswoman it's cute and sing songy. I bet it would sound better in song than just reading it.
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@us-poet true
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@us-poet You're right. I guess apparently I'm more of a songwriter now lol
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What if you are a threat to society?
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@the_weird_kid said in Suicide is not an option:
What if you are threat to society?
a threat*
Idk, stop being such by seeking help?
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@thestrangest good point
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@the_weird_kid I do not believe anyone is a threat to the society unless if one is a criminal or something.
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@fearlesswoman True XD
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@fearlesswoman said in Suicide is not an option:
@the_weird_kid I do not believe anyone is a threat to the society unless if one is a criminal or something.
Maybe you should change it to "you're a benefit to humanity" it sounds better
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@thestrangest What about "You are not a threat to the society" because that one does sound better but they aren't gonna understand what this is about... kinda
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@fearlesswoman said in Suicide is not an option:
@thestrangest What about "You are not a threat to the society"
I don't think that many people out of the number of people who want to kill themselves believe they're a threat to society though but let's not focus on this line, let's focus on the 3 other lines i said were just in bad taste, if you want to
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@thestrangest What about now?
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1-"Just give a break to you and your anxiety"
This sux because you need professional help 99% of the time to stop chronic anxiety
2-"Don't let your soul be depressed"
If you have depression(ACTUAL depression, not just feeling down for a couple of days, DEPRESSION resulting from chemical imbalances in the brain) you need professional help and can't just decide to stop being depressed
3-""I'm stupid" should be written on your shirt"
I don't think that would fucking help, because they're not stupid, and it's stupid of you to say that they're acting stupid
4-"thank god you are the one blessed"
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@fearlesswoman nothing wrong with that. Keep up the good work, and let's hear you sing this, well at least let me hear you sing this.
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@us-poet said in You're a benefit to humanity:
@fearlesswoman nothing wrong with that. Keep up the good work, and let's hear you sing this, well at least let me hear you sing this.
I'd like so too but most importantly I'd like to see it revisited, reviewed and edited
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@FearlessWoman This is great. :smiling_face_with_heart-eyes: :smiling_face_with_heart-eyes:
It's a great display of your talent as well as feelings & emotion.
I can think of no better way to spread your beliefs in this matter.
Your words have touched me.
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This is very beautifully written buddy.
Thank you for sharing.
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@thestrangest And I'd like to see your response on that
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@us-poet Sure! :D