Thia is AMAZING! Your structure flows so well and your imagery is very intense, inciting a whirlwind of different emotions. I would absolutely LOVE to hear more!
I'll be your lover, and do you one better.
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I want to wake you up with pleasant memories,
instead of the terror you find from that negative sensory,
take care of you on the daily,
as our love is filled like a treasury,
so precious and cared for full of emotional gold,
as I hold your clay heart in my hands and use my words to mold,
you who are my monarch,
and I who is your counterpart,
as I lock into that window that reflects your interior,
where I see the version of myself that is superior,
and your presence does nothing but make me grin,
as we talk learning what lies within.
Eternal is an aspect I can easily see for us,
as without you life is just colorless,
so I always need you to brighten my life,
and in return I'll be your knight,
a glimmering protector,
where we'll make both of our lives better,
as we continue to write each other’s story,
one of love, passion, and glory,
I just want you in the end there standing next to me,
because I am your biggest devotee. -
@us-poet THIS is the reason why I love poetries
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@im-a-bae
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That was deep man ... :clap: :clap: :+1:
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@us-poet bravo...i wonder how such beautiful thoughts come up in ur mind...but still bravo!!
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@cutekanak
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This is so beautiful. It moves the inner hopeless romantic within me. How inspirational. Bravo dearie!
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@US-poet dab meh cuz i do not even know how to make a poem
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@prince_dastan all you have to do is start writing. That's it. Poetry doesn't even have to rhyme, just have a flow. Here's my favorite poet.
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marvellous :)