I wrote a depressing lil' poem :>



  • I'm in this vicious cycle, see
    The current pulling under me
    I feel so numb and lost at sea

    Sometimes in the ebbing tide
    You can hear my lonely cry
    Yet all the boats that come by
    Leave me there alone to die

    I hate myself so much for this

    Some ships seem to understand
    And come close with outstretched hand
    But just to feel the wind and sand

    The truth is, the fault is mine
    I knew the dangers of the brine
    But ships beyond the shoreline
    Drew me in like fishing line

    I hate myself so much for this

    Kudos to you if you can guess what it means.



  • @justchatamy
    I like this poem, comes from the heart... means a lot.



  • @mr_peanut Weren't you the person who interpreted this correctly back when I first wrote it?



  • @justchatamy said in I wrote a depressing lil' poem 😆:

    @mr_peanut Weren't you the person who interpreted this correctly back when I first wrote it?

    Ummmmmm . 😉 maaaaybeee lol


 

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