The poem that has no title.
marceleen last edited by marceleen
"I have been wondering in a
dark and dreary past,
where I thought love
would somehow last.
Only to find out in the end,
a broken heart with pieces to mend.
Then you came along unexpectedly,
In the sea, we met unintentionally.
I was about to drown hastily, but
you saved my sinking heart readily.
My life before was pale and tragic
But you turned it our into something
The first time I laid my eyes on you,
I knew there was something,
I don't know if you felt it too.
I let my pride get out of the way,
For i know i might be happy someday.
The hope of us together is what I have.
I know what Im feeling is certainly love.
I have to admit to myself that I have fallen.
That you came and had my heart stolen.
But to wish heartily for you,
I had to stop.
Because the moment I felt this,
You suddenly gave up."-
@marceleen This was so sad and emotional, and a journey I could easily picture. It's so unfortunate, but just another truth that goes along with the crazy journey of life.
As for a title how about,
Sometimes when you're lost, it's better to stay that way.
@marceleen add title
oh no another one....
@jynextremist this is now talk with poets. Get used to it.
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btw i liked your poem
u r awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@marceleen heart is still resisting
Kaleb last edited by
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Nice poem. The title can be "unrequited love".
Prince_Dastan Banned last edited by
@marceleen this poem (even tho without title) is better than those poems (that have title).