I read the whole of ur point.
Life is unpredictable,u never knoe what next card will show.Their comes a point when u dont like anyone because the person whom u love the most,done everything to make them close to u ..leaves u.At that very moment u knoe u ll be in depression and definitely u ll think u wanna suicide.But suicide is only not the option.
I got a relation we talk but things are not at all same,One who was who is and who ll be in my priority list found me irritating.All i could do is walk away from her life and leave her alone promising in my mind i m always for her,i cant be pysically available as she ll found more irritating but can be my prayers ll work here for her.
People reading the post will found me fool i knoe but if u trully love someone she is thier or not doesnt matter but u will always be their for her
Fall of Heaven (part 3)
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@Lazz I see that I can write I can even admit that it is good. But I don’t see this greatness that you all say you see. I’m just a simple young woman who expresses herself through writing. I’m just a simple writer. One day maybe I’ll be published.
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@Wicked_ Claire you are a genius ,you have such a talent! You need to be published, you belong in the pantheon of great modern writers. I admire the fuck out of you, please please please can a publishing house free ypu from your jail work and let you write full time,I'm sure you're a bad ass jailor (actually I'm not, i bet you're really fucking nice, that's a compliment btw) but you need to be free to fulfill your true vocation. There are some beautiful writers on this site but no one holds a candle to you, keep it coming you great modern author
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@Wicked_ I'm pretty sure you could write erotica Claire, i imagine it would be as vivid and emotive as the rest of your words. Sorry, just sayin'
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@Scottish what I'm gagging for though, is your sci fi, those initial sketches and draughts you posted, you have the potential to be the next isn m banks, he was such a fabulous writer, absolutely wonderful imagination, his "normal" novels as just plain old Iain banks (he only used the M as an initial name to distinguish that it was his sci fi stuff) i recommend Espedair Street to both you and Lazz, one of my favourite books of all time, you both will love it
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@Scottish 🤔🤫😉
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@Scottish Will look for. While treasure hunting keep eyes open for any from Cordwainer Smith.
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@Wicked_ oh trust Claire, believe Lazz's words, you're a rare and unique talent and that's my opinion as a voracious reader
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@Scottish Its not that I can’t wrote erotica. I’ve written it before and am fully capable. Just at times it’s hard to keep a good story going in erotica without seeming to just jump from one sex scene to the other. I prefer to write good stories not just good scenes.
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@Wicked_ There was that attempt at Romance, once, as I recall... :winking_face:
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@Wicked_ A good work there, A message to Chimra and her siblings,
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@Lazz I'll keep my eyes open Lazz, always on the lookout for a great new author.
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bloop beep bleep bleep boop
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Is it real story of your life?
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@Hasan-Ahmed No this is part three of a short story that is fictional
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Ohhh understand.
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@Scottish It's not easy to find "real" (paper) books of his. but if you are able to read ebooks (epub, mobi), let me know, and I can share, here