Marham marham dil pe laga
Marham marham dil pe laga @Codyy
Impeccant Wishes
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Feeling blue. How could this be true?
Never to have met, yet still to miss you?
Never to have kissed you; yet missed you...
Miss you;
I do.Forever true; I would be;
I for you, and you for me.
That is how, it ought to be;
I'd be yours, for all of time...
Forever yours;
would you be mine? -
@MadMen Beautiful poem! Keep writing, you have talent. 👏
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@MadMen magnificent
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What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
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