@chewie I’m glad you liked this one. I wrote it cause it was inspired by Nia. She’s been one person that’s always been there for me since I met her. No matter how depressed angry or upset I am she can literally put a smile on my face and make my day better.
Fall of Heaven (part 3)
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@Canadian-guy I could add sex but I prefer to not write erotica. If I did I’d probably go along the lines of Laurel K. But it’s too easy to lose story inside Erotica. And as for more I have no plans yet
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@Lazz Im glad that makes sense to someone
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@Wicked_ no it just reminds me stories I've read, just an observation, you do you ☺️
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@Wicked_ 😲😁🤭
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@Wicked_ and you wonder why ppl call you a wordsmith ...lol
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@Cosmic_Lady Oh, that she is, and so much more
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@Cosmic_Lady All I do is write. I put words to paper so to speak. I align them to form a picture and that’s all. I don’t see why you @Lazz @RoseLily and so many others say I’m a wordsmith
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what a wordsmith does , paint with words, create a picture, tell a story, dance with our imagination, weave a tale that makes us all want to follow
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@Cosmic_Lady by that definition then I’m not the only wordsmith here. You have talent doing just that yourself.
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@Wicked_ Perhaps we see in you something you aren't yet ready to see in yourself. See you, and all you are, the way we do. I do.
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@Lazz I see that I can write I can even admit that it is good. But I don’t see this greatness that you all say you see. I’m just a simple young woman who expresses herself through writing. I’m just a simple writer. One day maybe I’ll be published.
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@Wicked_ Claire you are a genius ,you have such a talent! You need to be published, you belong in the pantheon of great modern writers. I admire the fuck out of you, please please please can a publishing house free ypu from your jail work and let you write full time,I'm sure you're a bad ass jailor (actually I'm not, i bet you're really fucking nice, that's a compliment btw) but you need to be free to fulfill your true vocation. There are some beautiful writers on this site but no one holds a candle to you, keep it coming you great modern author
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@Wicked_ I'm pretty sure you could write erotica Claire, i imagine it would be as vivid and emotive as the rest of your words. Sorry, just sayin'
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@Scottish what I'm gagging for though, is your sci fi, those initial sketches and draughts you posted, you have the potential to be the next isn m banks, he was such a fabulous writer, absolutely wonderful imagination, his "normal" novels as just plain old Iain banks (he only used the M as an initial name to distinguish that it was his sci fi stuff) i recommend Espedair Street to both you and Lazz, one of my favourite books of all time, you both will love it
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@Scottish 🤔🤫😉
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@Scottish Will look for. While treasure hunting keep eyes open for any from Cordwainer Smith.
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@Wicked_ oh trust Claire, believe Lazz's words, you're a rare and unique talent and that's my opinion as a voracious reader
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@Scottish Its not that I can’t wrote erotica. I’ve written it before and am fully capable. Just at times it’s hard to keep a good story going in erotica without seeming to just jump from one sex scene to the other. I prefer to write good stories not just good scenes.
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@Wicked_ There was that attempt at Romance, once, as I recall... :winking_face:
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@Wicked_ A good work there, A message to Chimra and her siblings,
Heaven is a mere superstition arising from desire, and desire is ever a yoke, a degeneration.