Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing



  • Would love to get opinions on my sensual work with words. Anyone interested in romantic/sensual creative writing and poetry inspired by desire and artistic description?

    High light

    Something about the way the light just touched your face
    In this room of windows
    The two of us.

    Present tense
    Silently sitting
    Casting anxious nets at the open hours so fleeting
    Individual leisure during the daylight?
    Unheard of.

    Cloth and needle
    Pencil and scratch

    When some fractal of sun came seeking you
    To think like I do
    To see itself through the filter of you
    Like some visible radar from heaven
    To be closer to what only I know
    To speak to me
    Like a beacon of angelic light
    To show you in some semblance of productive peace
    To give you over to my imagination
    Like I needed any help.



  • Morning at the water

    Mist rose from the river this morning. The sun's rising cast the early light. In the cool of the raveen, some apparition illuminates, lingering and still. As stumbling upon deer, cautiously frozen, awaiting my next move. It loomed above the moving mirrored surface. Silently hovering. The constant rush over rocky river bed below fills all the space in my ears. The damp air smells of wood and earth, hints of cedar. It strikes some soothing chord within me. I close eyes and breathe the verdant essence of lush loam and lichen. The sounds of life force rushing its watery path. No ranger am I, but I feel inside that part of me has been here through my eternity. Like some ancient spirit of the forest that forgot its home. My fingers push through the moss and feel it's sponge. My feet through the grass and gravel, sand between my toes. No street can give me, no buildings strike awe, no home or garden holds the wonder, of the trails I've followed along.



  • @lostintrees This is beautiful!!! The imagery 😮 masterpiece!



  • @lostintrees hey, you’re welcome, just stating the facts!



  • @lostintrees ... please message me to review more...



  • @alizajalebiiiiii hey thank you so much!
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  • @lostintrees said in Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing:

    Morning at the water

    Mist rose from the river this morning. The sun's rising cast the early light. In the cool of the raveen, some apparition illuminates, lingering and still. As stumbling upon deer, cautiously frozen, awaiting my next move. It loomed above the moving mirrored surface. Silently hovering. The constant rush over rocky river bed below fills all the space in my ears. The damp air smells of wood and earth, hints of cedar. It strikes some soothing chord within me. I close eyes and breathe the verdant essence of lush loam and lichen. The sounds of life force rushing its watery path. No ranger am I, but I feel inside that part of me has been here through my eternity. Like some ancient spirit of the forest that forgot its home. My fingers push through the moss and feel it's sponge. My feet through the grass and gravel, sand between my toes. No street can give me, no buildings strike awe, no home or garden holds the wonder, of the trails I've followed along.

    Beautiful! I can actually imagine myself near a river bank...this is refreshing







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