@lena_8 thanks Iām glad you enjoyed it.
@Vick953 Iām fine
@Lazz I'm not sure where I could go with another part Iām toying with the idea of an epilogue but Iād need more feedback on what should happen in it.
@Wicked_ The after the call to arms. So many possibilities!
@Lazz i know so many ways to twist and turn it. I have A.) I need C.) so that I could make B.) if that makes any sense to anyone else besides me.
@Wicked_ oh nice it reminds of the beginning of stories from some authors on literotica. Like very well written stories of heaven and hell(sex to but the reasons story is so good) keep up the good work
@Wicked_ glad you have plot lines already figured out. I would go with what gives the reader the most unsuspecting
@Wicked_ Makes perfect sense
@Canadian-guy I could add sex but I prefer to not write erotica. If I did Iād probably go along the lines of Laurel K. But itās too easy to lose story inside Erotica. And as for more I have no plans yet
@Lazz Im glad that makes sense to someone
@Wicked_ no it just reminds me stories I've read, just an observation, you do you āŗļø
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@Wicked_ and you wonder why ppl call you a wordsmith ...lol
@Cosmic_Lady Oh, that she is, and so much more
@Cosmic_Lady All I do is write. I put words to paper so to speak. I align them to form a picture and thatās all. I donāt see why you @Lazz @RoseLily and so many others say Iām a wordsmith
what a wordsmith does , paint with words, create a picture, tell a story, dance with our imagination, weave a tale that makes us all want to follow
@Cosmic_Lady by that definition then Iām not the only wordsmith here. You have talent doing just that yourself.
@Wicked_ Perhaps we see in you something you aren't yet ready to see in yourself. See you, and all you are, the way we do. I do.
@Lazz I see that I can write I can even admit that it is good. But I donāt see this greatness that you all say you see. Iām just a simple young woman who expresses herself through writing. Iām just a simple writer. One day maybe Iāll be published.
@Wicked_ Claire you are a genius ,you have such a talent! You need to be published, you belong in the pantheon of great modern writers. I admire the fuck out of you, please please please can a publishing house free ypu from your jail work and let you write full time,I'm sure you're a bad ass jailor (actually I'm not, i bet you're really fucking nice, that's a compliment btw) but you need to be free to fulfill your true vocation. There are some beautiful writers on this site but no one holds a candle to you, keep it coming you great modern author
@Wicked_ I'm pretty sure you could write erotica Claire, i imagine it would be as vivid and emotive as the rest of your words. Sorry, just sayin'
@Scottish what I'm gagging for though, is your sci fi, those initial sketches and draughts you posted, you have the potential to be the next isn m banks, he was such a fabulous writer, absolutely wonderful imagination, his "normal" novels as just plain old Iain banks (he only used the M as an initial name to distinguish that it was his sci fi stuff) i recommend Espedair Street to both you and Lazz, one of my favourite books of all time, you both will love it