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Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :)
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Hello ladies and gentleman !
It's me ,CJKO trying to have fun.
I still got a lot of important things that I must have done,
but here I am right now , acting like a lazy woman. :D -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
Hello ladies and gentlemen !
It's me ,CJKO trying to have fun.
I still got a lot of important things that I must have done,
but here I am right now , acting like a lazy woman. :DHi there, and once again
We shall do battle with paper and a pen
First tho I must declare
I have an appointment and must be there
I hours time I will be free
to do poetic jousting with The ;)I got my coat and I must go
By for now to Ms Cjko
:wave: -
@Durwin said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
Hello ladies and gentlemen !
It's me ,CJKO trying to have fun.
I still got a lot of important things that I must have done,
but here I am right now , acting like a lazy woman. :DHi there, and once again
We shall do battle with paper and a pen
First tho I must declare
I have an appointment and must be there
I hours time I will be free
to do poetic jousting with The ;)I got my coat and I must go
By for now to Ms Cjko
:wave:wow ! you are really up for this kind of game.
I know it's kinda boring and lame.
I'm having fun and shame,
you are the first poet of the night who came. :D -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@Durwin said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
Hello ladies and gentlemen !
It's me ,CJKO trying to have fun.
I still got a lot of important things that I must have done,
but here I am right now , acting like a lazy woman. :DHi there, and once again
We shall do battle with paper and a pen
First tho I must declare
I have an appointment and must be there
I hours time I will be free
to do poetic jousting with The ;)I got my coat and I must go
By for now to Ms Cjko
:wave:wow ! you are really up for this kind of game.
I know it's kinda boring and lame.
I'm having fun and shame,
you are the first poet of the night who came. :DI am the first poet who came? :O
But Madame, this is neither boring or lame,
For the fun has only just begun,
Don't be frighted, do not run,
We need more people to join the fray,
With the vocals, their lyrics here today,
Come peeps get out your comments
Of cheek or wisdom or other sonnets ! -
@Durwin said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
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With the vocals, their lyrics here today,
Come peeps get out your comments
Of cheek or wisdom or other sonnets !Let's keep it going, with rime and reason,
breaking the verse we punish as treason,
standing up straight with our heads held high,
we delare war on boredom this day,
letting neither fear nor shame hold us back,
we open our hearts and tak tak tak,
we type the words, that were never before,
put in this order, and will never be more,
to fight for the freedom past onto us,
freedom of speech a freedom tremendous,
to speak what we think and live how we choose,
received unearned yet we will not loose. -
@pe7erpark3r said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@Durwin said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
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With the vocals, their lyrics here today,
Come peeps get out your comments
Of cheek or wisdom or other sonnets !Let's keep it going, with rime and reason,
breaking the verse we punish as treason,
standing up straight with our heads held high,
we delare war on boredom this day,
letting neither fear nor shame hold us back,
we open our hearts and tak tak tak,
we type the words, that were never before,
put in this order, and will never be more,
to fight for the freedom past onto us,
freedom of speech a freedom tremendous,
to speak what we think and live how we choose,
received unearned yet we will not loose.Your last verse makes no sense microwave
would you mind if I call you naive
just wanted a word that could rhyme
me writing poem is a big crime
this fly likes to chase a pappa,
Especially one that's in the captcha
See the loving of durwin's 16 y/o boy,
oh wait, durwin is here to suck all the joy
Pappa you complain about flirting
I gotta love it though, somebody still speaks about the benzene ring
~ ewwwwwww -
@pe7erpark3r
To Mr Parker and his Spidey senses,
Amaze all of us, they are stupendous!
Swinging in from the rafters so high,
Is he gonna catch the guy?Unlike the one most @Firefly,
Who lurks and schemes but never shy.
Always in the background thy,
Trying to catch my little guy!For both of you this is a simple verse,
Could be more, could be worse!
I finish here on the happy note,
You both awesome, we need no vote :joy: -
I dont need such bonding
I dont need such fake wording
I just need something
More than a comfortable feelingIt was not a new meeting
You always make me wondering
You always make me remembering
That every journey should have endingSo, would it be a pleasure?
If you are still not sure
Would you try it more?You know you have scored
Every single of my heart
Just say you in beats
Would you feel it?@JessicaGrant hows that poem? :p
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@G-A said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
I dont need such bonding
I dont need such fake wording
I just need something
More than a comfortable feelingIt was not a new meeting
You always make me wondering
You always make me remembering
That every journey should have endingSo, would it be a pleasure?
If you are still not sure
Would you try it more?You know you have scored
Every single of my heart
Just say you in beats
Would you feel it?@JessicaGrant hows that poem? :p
It has a nice catch to it , i'm not the one to rate poems but it does have them good bars and rhymes so it could do for an e m o t i o n a l r a p
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@JessicaGrant said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@G-A said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
I dont need such bonding
I dont need such fake wording
I just need something
More than a comfortable feelingIt was not a new meeting
You always make me wondering
You always make me remembering
That every journey should have endingSo, would it be a pleasure?
If you are still not sure
Would you try it more?You know you have scored
Every single of my heart
Just say you in beats
Would you feel it?@JessicaGrant hows that poem? :p
It has a nice catch to it , i'm not the one to rate poems but it does have them good bars and rhymes so it could do for an e m o t i o n a l r a p
Use that for your music lyric tho. You ever mentioned me that writing lyric is the hardest things for ya. I will support you if you want to make a music again Jess. @WtfJudith missed your music too i guess.
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HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME. -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME.Got all now the fame?
you know exactly how to get me in the game,
This site of many and the few,
have been awaiting just for you!Now how does this game end?
with the hand of a friend?
Friend of old, friend of new,
Is thing nothing much to do?So here it is, this verse of few,
Not many people, they have things to do!
So here it is, I hand back to you
the one, the only CJKO ;) -
@DayShifter said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME.Got all now the fame?
you know exactly how to get me in the game,
This site of many and the few,
have been awaiting just for you!Now how does this game end?
with the hand of a friend?
Friend of old, friend of new,
Is thing nothing much to do?So here it is, this verse of few,
Not many people, they have things to do!
So here it is, I hand back to you
the one, the only CJKO ;)Hahahands up! you won. :)
seems like the battle is yours to own.
People in this battle are now gone,
at least they had some fun. -
@cjko
He had won?
With the People gone?
But alas! Something shone!
Who is that girl, all a-lone?Coming closer, walking quite strange...
Is that really a human behaving estranged?
Her body seems very fragile.
Yet strutting so elegantly and agile.Smiling so eerie.
Who is this weirdy?
Knife in her hands.
Before you she stands."Greetings! I am Kara."
"Thank You! For the laughter."
"Your poems brought a joy to my heart."
"I will kindly give you one too as reward." -
@Karina-Kara said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko
He had won?
With the People gone?
But alas! Something shone!
Who is that girl, all a-lone?Coming closer, walking quite strange...
Is that really a human behaving estranged?
Her body seems very fragile.
Yet strutting so elegantly and agile.Smiling so eerie.
Who is this weirdy?
Knife in her hands.
Before you she stands."Greetings! I am Kara."
"Thank You! For the laughter."
"Your poems brought a joy to my heart."
"I will kindly give you one too as reward."I will kindly gie you one too as reward
Why thank you ms for I wull surely horde,
For I am glad to see you have enjoyed,
These lyrics, the rthymes, from far and wide.I bid you welcome to this game,
Of words than bring no shame,
Enjoy the battle as it still unfolds,
For @cjko brings fun that never gets old!So bring your words, no fer of the dark,
Come on in, step up to the mark,
If we are lucky others will arrive,
With more words, with passion and drive. -
@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours. -
@Karina-Kara said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours.To annew this place for hours,
That sound much better than sour,
For the many see, but act as blinde!
and don't wish to partake this sort of bind.For those that see, and not partake,
It is you whom we forsake!.
Just this fun topic to do,
Should have some thing for you.On this Friday of all the days,
We seek to find our better ways.
to hear, to rhyme and create a verse,
Is there anything worse?Come join and a rejoice with us,
This plethara from the abyss.
Lines of many, verse of few,
I wander if, what, where and who?This be the place to make no sense,
The community of many hence!
We are here, heard from miles apart,
The ones who have the heart of heart.Such a shame more don't reply,
To this topic, this legend, this this poetic time!
But we are the ones to keep it alive,
The few, the lonely, the ones that survive. -
Ah, the torment !
Am I to respond, to retort ?
I yelled for my pen was pent,
Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,You called for the unseen ears,
Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
Perhaps without even knowing,
And yet, here I am, once again writing,I fear I may carry some rust,
But since the cause is noble,
May we once more shake this dust,
And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble. -
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Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
that can reach anywhere in height.You put beam on my face ,
and make my heart in chase.
I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
It's like a tasty smelling dish
Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss :* <3