@Mickeyyyyy then you should work out more on your passion..you are cool
Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :)
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@G-A said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
I dont need such bonding
I dont need such fake wording
I just need something
More than a comfortable feelingIt was not a new meeting
You always make me wondering
You always make me remembering
That every journey should have endingSo, would it be a pleasure?
If you are still not sure
Would you try it more?You know you have scored
Every single of my heart
Just say you in beats
Would you feel it?@JessicaGrant hows that poem? :p
It has a nice catch to it , i'm not the one to rate poems but it does have them good bars and rhymes so it could do for an e m o t i o n a l r a p
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@JessicaGrant said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@G-A said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
I dont need such bonding
I dont need such fake wording
I just need something
More than a comfortable feelingIt was not a new meeting
You always make me wondering
You always make me remembering
That every journey should have endingSo, would it be a pleasure?
If you are still not sure
Would you try it more?You know you have scored
Every single of my heart
Just say you in beats
Would you feel it?@JessicaGrant hows that poem? :p
It has a nice catch to it , i'm not the one to rate poems but it does have them good bars and rhymes so it could do for an e m o t i o n a l r a p
Use that for your music lyric tho. You ever mentioned me that writing lyric is the hardest things for ya. I will support you if you want to make a music again Jess. @WtfJudith missed your music too i guess.
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HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME. -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME.Got all now the fame?
you know exactly how to get me in the game,
This site of many and the few,
have been awaiting just for you!Now how does this game end?
with the hand of a friend?
Friend of old, friend of new,
Is thing nothing much to do?So here it is, this verse of few,
Not many people, they have things to do!
So here it is, I hand back to you
the one, the only CJKO ;) -
@DayShifter said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
HAHAHA
I'm back, Hello.
Where are thou?
I'm here reading this battle feeling like a psycho,
smiling, laughing and thinking what to do.I couldn't think of much,
seems like I'm in a rush.
Let's beat around the bush,
these poems here are like a smash!Congrats to all poet who came,
even this game is a sort of meme.
I can't mention each of your name,
All I can just say is you got all now the FAME.Got all now the fame?
you know exactly how to get me in the game,
This site of many and the few,
have been awaiting just for you!Now how does this game end?
with the hand of a friend?
Friend of old, friend of new,
Is thing nothing much to do?So here it is, this verse of few,
Not many people, they have things to do!
So here it is, I hand back to you
the one, the only CJKO ;)Hahahands up! you won. :)
seems like the battle is yours to own.
People in this battle are now gone,
at least they had some fun. -
@cjko
He had won?
With the People gone?
But alas! Something shone!
Who is that girl, all a-lone?Coming closer, walking quite strange...
Is that really a human behaving estranged?
Her body seems very fragile.
Yet strutting so elegantly and agile.Smiling so eerie.
Who is this weirdy?
Knife in her hands.
Before you she stands."Greetings! I am Kara."
"Thank You! For the laughter."
"Your poems brought a joy to my heart."
"I will kindly give you one too as reward." -
@Karina-Kara said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko
He had won?
With the People gone?
But alas! Something shone!
Who is that girl, all a-lone?Coming closer, walking quite strange...
Is that really a human behaving estranged?
Her body seems very fragile.
Yet strutting so elegantly and agile.Smiling so eerie.
Who is this weirdy?
Knife in her hands.
Before you she stands."Greetings! I am Kara."
"Thank You! For the laughter."
"Your poems brought a joy to my heart."
"I will kindly give you one too as reward."I will kindly gie you one too as reward
Why thank you ms for I wull surely horde,
For I am glad to see you have enjoyed,
These lyrics, the rthymes, from far and wide.I bid you welcome to this game,
Of words than bring no shame,
Enjoy the battle as it still unfolds,
For @cjko brings fun that never gets old!So bring your words, no fer of the dark,
Come on in, step up to the mark,
If we are lucky others will arrive,
With more words, with passion and drive. -
@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours. -
@Karina-Kara said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours.To annew this place for hours,
That sound much better than sour,
For the many see, but act as blinde!
and don't wish to partake this sort of bind.For those that see, and not partake,
It is you whom we forsake!.
Just this fun topic to do,
Should have some thing for you.On this Friday of all the days,
We seek to find our better ways.
to hear, to rhyme and create a verse,
Is there anything worse?Come join and a rejoice with us,
This plethara from the abyss.
Lines of many, verse of few,
I wander if, what, where and who?This be the place to make no sense,
The community of many hence!
We are here, heard from miles apart,
The ones who have the heart of heart.Such a shame more don't reply,
To this topic, this legend, this this poetic time!
But we are the ones to keep it alive,
The few, the lonely, the ones that survive. -
Ah, the torment !
Am I to respond, to retort ?
I yelled for my pen was pent,
Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,You called for the unseen ears,
Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
Perhaps without even knowing,
And yet, here I am, once again writing,I fear I may carry some rust,
But since the cause is noble,
May we once more shake this dust,
And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble. -
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Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
that can reach anywhere in height.You put beam on my face ,
and make my heart in chase.
I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
It's like a tasty smelling dish
Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss :* <3 -
@Melon said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
Ah, the torment !
Am I to respond, to retort ?
I yelled for my pen was pent,
Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,You called for the unseen ears,
Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
Perhaps without even knowing,
And yet, here I am, once again writing,I fear I may carry some rust,
But since the cause is noble,
May we once more shake this dust,
And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble.
=====================================Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
that can reach anywhere in height.You put beam on my face ,
and make my heart in chase.
I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
It's like a tasty smelling dish
Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss 😘 ❤
======================================Words rebuilt this poetic rubble?
Fear not there is not trouble,
As the words keep coming for all the day,
And enter this intriguing foray.You never know there might be other's,
That come, that join with words they'd smother.
It's great to see this thread alive,
With wit and humor to make us strive!Strive for yet another day,
This is how we make our way.
Throught this land, this forrest clear,
Lots of people that wish to hear.Now to CJ with her kind words,
That compairs things to some tasty herbs,
I am sure the others would both agree,
We send those viruals back to thee. :) -
While I was trying to scroll up,
this post makes me stop.
Tws silence is deafening me,
poets and thinkers, where are thee? -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
While I was trying to scroll up,
this post makes me stop.
Tws silence is deafening me,
poets and thinkers, where are thee?Poets and thinkers, where are thee?
We are here, there we are more than three!,
Is this silence that you mention to me
As bad as that for deffaning thee?Is this a further challange from you?
That April Fool joking Ms C J Ko!
For we will come, and share
Make an ode to the one from out there -
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :) -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
For that was a compliment I can not speak,
Of the jokes that you continue to leak.I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
We are waiting to see if you live up to it.As for the others, they do not show,
Such a shame as they bring a glow.
Come people join with us,
On this eteranl poetic battle bus xD -
@DayShifter said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
For that was a compliment I can not speak,
Of the jokes that you continue to leak.I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
We are waiting to see if you live up to it.As for the others, they do not show,
Such a shame as they bring a glow.
Come people join with us,
On this eteranl poetic battle bus xDOn this eternal poetic battle bus,
There are only two creature trying to invite the mass.
@Wolfie_11 and @Saloniii don't just upvote this,
I'm typing this to send you a hissss.@DayShifter you don't have to make your post long,
For that, we can make a TWS community a song.
I dunno if I'm still on track,
I'm just trying some jokes to crack. :D -
@cjko @DayShifter
I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
Where two great poets made me bow;
This rhyme battle never got rough,
All this had was good and admiring stuff.Such clean battle from far I admire,
Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
These eight lines took me an eternity;
Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity. -
@Wolfie_11 said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko @DayShifter
I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
Where two great poets made me bow;
This rhyme battle never got rough,
All this had was good and admiring stuff.Such clean battle from far I admire,
Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
These eight lines took me an eternity;
Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity.Yes, hello, you are here yo!
I'm glad not sad that you came too.
Fret not, just smile, and relax,
All you need to do is think out of the box.Hoax you may think this is,
a battle that you do want to miss.
Still feel elated that you tried this,
It brings us all closer to peace. :)
