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Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :)
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@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours. -
@Karina-Kara said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter
Acknowledged hereby is your invite.
Let's remember the fallen in respite.
Many great odes will now be written,
Uncovered will be that what is hidden.Only the fearless may proceed,
Brave ones, foolish ones, will pay the deed.
Do not walk the middle road,
And jumped over was another moat.The poesy here is such a delight.
Kindly turn on that lantern light?
The castle walls get all so bright!
We venture forth, into the night.We're in awe, everythings decayed!
The construct from before all flayed.
This task became a duty of ours.
To annew this place for endless hours.To annew this place for hours,
That sound much better than sour,
For the many see, but act as blinde!
and don't wish to partake this sort of bind.For those that see, and not partake,
It is you whom we forsake!.
Just this fun topic to do,
Should have some thing for you.On this Friday of all the days,
We seek to find our better ways.
to hear, to rhyme and create a verse,
Is there anything worse?Come join and a rejoice with us,
This plethara from the abyss.
Lines of many, verse of few,
I wander if, what, where and who?This be the place to make no sense,
The community of many hence!
We are here, heard from miles apart,
The ones who have the heart of heart.Such a shame more don't reply,
To this topic, this legend, this this poetic time!
But we are the ones to keep it alive,
The few, the lonely, the ones that survive. -
Ah, the torment !
Am I to respond, to retort ?
I yelled for my pen was pent,
Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,You called for the unseen ears,
Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
Perhaps without even knowing,
And yet, here I am, once again writing,I fear I may carry some rust,
But since the cause is noble,
May we once more shake this dust,
And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble. -
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Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
that can reach anywhere in height.You put beam on my face ,
and make my heart in chase.
I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
It's like a tasty smelling dish
Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss :* <3 -
@Melon said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
Ah, the torment !
Am I to respond, to retort ?
I yelled for my pen was pent,
Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,You called for the unseen ears,
Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
Perhaps without even knowing,
And yet, here I am, once again writing,I fear I may carry some rust,
But since the cause is noble,
May we once more shake this dust,
And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble.
=====================================Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
that can reach anywhere in height.You put beam on my face ,
and make my heart in chase.
I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
It's like a tasty smelling dish
Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss 😘 ❤
======================================Words rebuilt this poetic rubble?
Fear not there is not trouble,
As the words keep coming for all the day,
And enter this intriguing foray.You never know there might be other's,
That come, that join with words they'd smother.
It's great to see this thread alive,
With wit and humor to make us strive!Strive for yet another day,
This is how we make our way.
Throught this land, this forrest clear,
Lots of people that wish to hear.Now to CJ with her kind words,
That compairs things to some tasty herbs,
I am sure the others would both agree,
We send those viruals back to thee. :) -
While I was trying to scroll up,
this post makes me stop.
Tws silence is deafening me,
poets and thinkers, where are thee? -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
While I was trying to scroll up,
this post makes me stop.
Tws silence is deafening me,
poets and thinkers, where are thee?Poets and thinkers, where are thee?
We are here, there we are more than three!,
Is this silence that you mention to me
As bad as that for deffaning thee?Is this a further challange from you?
That April Fool joking Ms C J Ko!
For we will come, and share
Make an ode to the one from out there -
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :) -
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
For that was a compliment I can not speak,
Of the jokes that you continue to leak.I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
We are waiting to see if you live up to it.As for the others, they do not show,
Such a shame as they bring a glow.
Come people join with us,
On this eteranl poetic battle bus xD -
@DayShifter said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@DayShifter HAHAHA :D
Again, again the English man is here
his words are as sharp as spear.
Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
For that was a compliment I can not speak,
Of the jokes that you continue to leak.I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
We are waiting to see if you live up to it.As for the others, they do not show,
Such a shame as they bring a glow.
Come people join with us,
On this eteranl poetic battle bus xDOn this eternal poetic battle bus,
There are only two creature trying to invite the mass.
@Wolfie_11 and @Saloniii don't just upvote this,
I'm typing this to send you a hissss.@DayShifter you don't have to make your post long,
For that, we can make a TWS community a song.
I dunno if I'm still on track,
I'm just trying some jokes to crack. :D -
@cjko @DayShifter
I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
Where two great poets made me bow;
This rhyme battle never got rough,
All this had was good and admiring stuff.Such clean battle from far I admire,
Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
These eight lines took me an eternity;
Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity. -
@Wolfie_11 said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko @DayShifter
I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
Where two great poets made me bow;
This rhyme battle never got rough,
All this had was good and admiring stuff.Such clean battle from far I admire,
Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
These eight lines took me an eternity;
Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity.Yes, hello, you are here yo!
I'm glad not sad that you came too.
Fret not, just smile, and relax,
All you need to do is think out of the box.Hoax you may think this is,
a battle that you do want to miss.
Still feel elated that you tried this,
It brings us all closer to peace. :) -
@cjko
Peace is a concept so over-rated,
In the name of which, innocents are baited;
The violence is justified, and the silence is slated,
And hearing insults against the opposite thoughts makes ‘em elated.I might have gone a tad off-track,
Pardon me for that, I would try to keep up with the pack;
However, my one piece made DayShifter rattle,
Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle. (Mic drop) -
@Wolfie_11 said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):
@cjko
Peace is a concept so over-rated,
In the name of which, innocents are baited;
The violence is justified, and the silence is slated,
And hearing insults against the opposite thoughts makes ‘em elated.I might have gone a tad off-track,
Pardon me for that, I would try to keep up with the pack;
However, my one piece made DayShifter rattle,
Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle. (Mic drop)** Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle.**
I guess mine is the cage your trying to rattle,
For once in a while, I ste away from this place,
To make things better , to enjoy this race!For mine are the lyrics that sometimes make sense ,
This is what I say to you hence,
I am here I am back I have returned
But I feel this has been postponed
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:joy:
hey guys -
@DayShifter
Speak of the Devil and here he arrives,
And brings with him, his belated Hi’s;
Heard a lot about you, so pleasure to again meet,
Rhyming lines after lines is no mean feat.Time to ignite the spark and turn on the heat,
Your meaningful lyrics would sound good to a beat;
Enough with the sweetness, time to get tough,
Fasten your seatbelts, its about to get rough. -
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@Karina-Kara
Oh your words! So sublime as dagger,
Hits me in the right places with such swagger;
Wish I can do something more than upvote,
But I shall suffice by adoring the feelings with which you wrote.Thrown out of chat, removed from your friends,
Is this where your longing for me ends?;
If the wolf shows you care, you shall pay heed,
There’s already so much you face, I don’t think there’s one more problem you need. -
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@DIV
Sky is Blue,
And Roses are Red,
That post from you,
Just ruined this thread.Damn. Damn. Damn.
You might hear an earful from the one who calls me Ham;
The scene you described is rather bad,
But the fact that you saw it, makes me wonder if you’re that sad.
