• @Melon said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @DayShifter

    Ah, the torment !
    Am I to respond, to retort ?
    I yelled for my pen was pent,
    Perhaps here's an answer, albeit short,

    You called for the unseen ears,
    Quiet, I longed for the leading feathers,
    Perhaps without even knowing,
    And yet, here I am, once again writing,

    I fear I may carry some rust,
    But since the cause is noble,
    May we once more shake this dust,
    And with words rebuild atop this poetic rubble.
    =====================================

    Tonight ,all your poems are in my sight,
    Talks about things with sense and wisdoms with a might.
    May all those sentiments and wishes will fly as kite,
    that can reach anywhere in height.

    You put beam on my face ,
    and make my heart in chase.
    I'm glad to read these poems you graced,
    It will forever in my memories that can't be erased.

    Continue creating poems , is my today's wish
    It's like a tasty smelling dish
    Feeding up my hungry mind with this.
    I'm waving now with a virtual hug and kiss 😘 ❤
    ======================================

    Words rebuilt this poetic rubble?
    Fear not there is not trouble,
    As the words keep coming for all the day,
    And enter this intriguing foray.

    You never know there might be other's,
    That come, that join with words they'd smother.
    It's great to see this thread alive,
    With wit and humor to make us strive!

    Strive for yet another day,
    This is how we make our way.
    Throught this land, this forrest clear,
    Lots of people that wish to hear.

    Now to CJ with her kind words,
    That compairs things to some tasty herbs,
    I am sure the others would both agree,
    We send those viruals back to thee. :)

    @cjko , @Melon , @Karina-Kara


  • While I was trying to scroll up,
    this post makes me stop.
    Tws silence is deafening me,
    poets and thinkers, where are thee?


  • @cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    While I was trying to scroll up,
    this post makes me stop.
    Tws silence is deafening me,
    poets and thinkers, where are thee?

    Poets and thinkers, where are thee?
    We are here, there we are more than three!,
    Is this silence that you mention to me
    As bad as that for deffaning thee?

    Is this a further challange from you?
    That April Fool joking Ms C J Ko!
    For we will come, and share
    Make an ode to the one from out there


  • @DayShifter HAHAHA :D

    Again, again the English man is here
    his words are as sharp as spear.
    Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
    Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)


  • @cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @DayShifter HAHAHA :D

    Again, again the English man is here
    his words are as sharp as spear.
    Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
    Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)

    Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
    Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
    For that was a compliment I can not speak,
    Of the jokes that you continue to leak.

    I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
    Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
    You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
    We are waiting to see if you live up to it.

    As for the others, they do not show,
    Such a shame as they bring a glow.
    Come people join with us,
    On this eteranl poetic battle bus xD


  • @DayShifter said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @cjko said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @DayShifter HAHAHA :D

    Again, again the English man is here
    his words are as sharp as spear.
    Beware, be aware for he might give you fear
    Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)

    Sir, sir you are such a dear. :)
    Oh ma lady, the one that can hear,
    For that was a compliment I can not speak,
    Of the jokes that you continue to leak.

    I see there is Wolfie hiding somewhere,
    Come sir and join, make an apperance here,
    You spoke of brains, talent and wit,
    We are waiting to see if you live up to it.

    As for the others, they do not show,
    Such a shame as they bring a glow.
    Come people join with us,
    On this eteranl poetic battle bus xD

    On this eternal poetic battle bus,
    There are only two creature trying to invite the mass.
    @Wolfie_11 and @Saloniii don't just upvote this,
    I'm typing this to send you a hissss.

    @DayShifter you don't have to make your post long,
    For that, we can make a TWS community a song.
    I dunno if I'm still on track,
    I'm just trying some jokes to crack. :D


  • @cjko @DayShifter
    I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
    Where two great poets made me bow;
    This rhyme battle never got rough,
    All this had was good and admiring stuff.

    Such clean battle from far I admire,
    Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
    These eight lines took me an eternity;
    Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity.


  • @Wolfie_11 said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @cjko @DayShifter
    I lurked and lurked, to witness the show,
    Where two great poets made me bow;
    This rhyme battle never got rough,
    All this had was good and admiring stuff.

    Such clean battle from far I admire,
    Didn’t wanna intrude and draw people’s ire;
    These eight lines took me an eternity;
    Clearly today my rhyming stocks are not at Infinity.

    Yes, hello, you are here yo!
    I'm glad not sad that you came too.
    Fret not, just smile, and relax,
    All you need to do is think out of the box.

    Hoax you may think this is,
    a battle that you do want to miss.
    Still feel elated that you tried this,
    It brings us all closer to peace. :)


  • @cjko
    Peace is a concept so over-rated,
    In the name of which, innocents are baited;
    The violence is justified, and the silence is slated,
    And hearing insults against the opposite thoughts makes ‘em elated.

    I might have gone a tad off-track,
    Pardon me for that, I would try to keep up with the pack;
    However, my one piece made DayShifter rattle,
    Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle. (Mic drop)


  • @Wolfie_11 said in Who is up for POEM BATTLE part 2 ? :):

    @cjko
    Peace is a concept so over-rated,
    In the name of which, innocents are baited;
    The violence is justified, and the silence is slated,
    And hearing insults against the opposite thoughts makes ‘em elated.

    I might have gone a tad off-track,
    Pardon me for that, I would try to keep up with the pack;
    However, my one piece made DayShifter rattle,
    Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle. (Mic drop)

    ** Vindicated by the fact that he didn’t return to the battle.**
    I guess mine is the cage your trying to rattle,
    For once in a while, I ste away from this place,
    To make things better , to enjoy this race!

    For mine are the lyrics that sometimes make sense ,
    This is what I say to you hence,
    I am here I am back I have returned
    But I feel this has been postponed
    .
    :joy:
    hey guys


  • @DayShifter
    Speak of the Devil and here he arrives,
    And brings with him, his belated Hi’s;
    Heard a lot about you, so pleasure to again meet,
    Rhyming lines after lines is no mean feat.

    Time to ignite the spark and turn on the heat,
    Your meaningful lyrics would sound good to a beat;
    Enough with the sweetness, time to get tough,
    Fasten your seatbelts, its about to get rough.


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  • @Karina-Kara
    Oh your words! So sublime as dagger,
    Hits me in the right places with such swagger;
    Wish I can do something more than upvote,
    But I shall suffice by adoring the feelings with which you wrote.

    Thrown out of chat, removed from your friends,
    Is this where your longing for me ends?;
    If the wolf shows you care, you shall pay heed,
    There’s already so much you face, I don’t think there’s one more problem you need.


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  • @DIV
    Sky is Blue,
    And Roses are Red,
    That post from you,
    Just ruined this thread.

    Damn. Damn. Damn.
    You might hear an earful from the one who calls me Ham;
    The scene you described is rather bad,
    But the fact that you saw it, makes me wonder if you’re that sad.


  • @Karina-Kara
    Now that I know what you truly feel?
    Are you kidding me? What...Do you want me to kneel?
    I don’t know what triggered your sudden response,
    You didn’t even gave me an effing chance.

    You talk of loving death and still get mad,
    When I ask of your ‘living status’ with an intention that is surely not bad;
    You know what? You’ve the right to refute,
    But the next time you do it with somebody, don’t dare address him as cute.

    I have sides good and evil,
    You’ve only seen the good, you wouldn’t wanna meet the devil;
    ‘Coz though you try to appear strong and brave;
    Lets be honest, you’re just childish and naive.

    If I’ve said good, I can also rant,
    Don’t make me do it, ‘coz its not what I want;
    Idk why I’m even addressing you in my rhyme,
    Lets just mutually agree that neither of us, to each other, is worth a dime.


  • @cjko
    All poems here are so lame
    From boring people, Alas! who's to blame.

    Now that I am here, lets us begin
    the real poem battle, the best you've ever seen.

    From the land of the rising sun, I hail
    A land of beauty, your heart will become frail.

    Now peasants, don't be afraid to fight me
    Else, run as far as my eyes can't see.


  • @Кara wow you are amazing kara....you have great potential.....miss u dear....