@WaterBearerMJ well said ::)
I WROTE A POEM- GOAT
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This was written back in 2017, when I was sort of depressed. LMAO. Thanks @US-poet for reviewing my poem. This is like my first ever long poem.
PS: Thanatos-Lord of death.Oh Satan, Oh Thanatos,
Could you be mine?
Take me far far away,
Where everything's just fine.
I'll touch my Lord's feet,
And pray for sometime,
For my parents who brought me up,
And others whom I thought were mine.Take me to the bottomless pit,
Where I would live and die,
But free me from this bit,
Unless you want me to die.Curse these bad times,
For all they brought were tears,
And very little smiles.'What's life?' She asked me,
With a smile as long as a mile,
I dont know if she noticed,
My plastered little smile.'It's beautiful', I said,
With a face as bright as the sun,
Who knew deep inside,
I was urging to kill myself with a gun?No smiles today, no love today,
Except for the ones I pretend,
Take me on a Friday,
To the heaven or the fiend.Oh Thanatos,, my soul at your commandment,
For I have none to meet,
None to wave goodbye,
None to give a feast,
None to sympathise me,
None to give a damn,
None to see my retarded self,
Go deep down the track.
None to kiss.
None to miss.
None to cry.
None to lie.
None to talk.
None to walk.
None to share.
Nor to spare.Here Iam, at your commandment,
I pray to you, the lord of death,
Take me far away.
This is a prayer,
A request,
A dead child's wish. -
@nutellabiggoat 👏👏👏👏👏👏 nice ....keep writing more 🖖
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@makiboy The last emoji :joy: @NutellaBigGoat
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Its the best!!!!!
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@sup lol i thought of doing something different 🖖
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Sup @sup 😋😋😋
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@MakiBoy ewwwwww
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@sup ahh I feel orgasm😂
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@nutellabiggoat don't forget to make him wear goat cologne.
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It's his own pee. -
I like it very edgy
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oh satan oh thanos.......no donald trump...... incomplete
its cool i guess just really dark for my taste
if u ever need rap verses or lyrics hmu