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Some people don’t notice this heart of glass.
Some look while others, they pass.
Glancing in the mirror he can only see.
Who in the world could accept me?
Little did he know how beautiful he truly was
One day this girl would fall for him because...
She sees past all the damage and pain,
She looks for the future and for both to gain.
To gain love and trust like everyone needs,
To grow a new fond love that always feeds.
Feeds on the happiness that they both make,
The happiness that fixed each other and made them great.
So here’s the tail of the heart now bonded,
The heart now beautifully perfect due to the love it has founded.
So before you judge a heart that is broken,
Look at the damage and take it as a token.
Something to realize what all they’ve went through,
With all of that suffering they knew.
Look at the help that you can do.
Their final hope could probably be you...(This is a poem based off of @BOOTS22 Post)
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@abby-83 damn. Wayyyyyy better than mine! Its perfect! Just like you! I love you Abby!
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@boots22 all I did was take your topic and put it into poem form
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@boots22 all I did was take your topic and put it into poem form
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@abby-83 this is incredible Abby
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@cltraltdelicious
When you're dealing with something so fragile,
you have to be a little gentle,
and support what ever path they would like to be taking,
you'll see the mistakes that will cause some cracking,
but as long as there is a good support behind,
those cracks will be filled in no time,
so just help their travels with a cautious hand,
and when you listen to them all they want you to do is understand,
their point of view,
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@us-poet wow!..haha...an observers response to my poem..Awesome!
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@us-poet When I was writing my response, I thought of this poem:
The Passionate Shepherd to His Loveby Christopher Marlowe (1599).Later in 1600, Sir Walter Raleigh made a reply to this poem entitled:
The Nymph's Reply to the ShepherdSee this link: http://www2.latech.edu/~bmagee/201/marlowe/shepherd_&_notes.htm
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“To know nothing about yourself is to live.
To know yourself badly is to think.”
― Fernando Pessoa, The Book of Disquiet
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What a wonder,what a alchemy,
ur eyes seems like a book of eternity,
the wider u smile,the nature gets greener,
the way u speak the creatures feel Comfort,
having a aura so divine,with a pure jovil smile,
how can someone be so pretty,I have never seen a person this gorgeous and kind.
@nour especially for you
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Marham marham dil pe laga
Marham marham dil pe laga @Codyy
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Bachpan se saath hai tera,
Yaadon me bhara pyaar hai tera,
Dur chahe kitni bhi ho tu,
Nhi ghate ga saath ye tera,
Ladti hai jhagadti hai ,
Bina kahe har baat samjhti hai,
Bin tere Tera bhaii akele hi rahega,
Tujhse accha koi dost naa rahega,
Behen hai tu meri ,vaada hai teri raksha karne ka,
Tera saath nibhane ka ,
Tu kitni bhi dur ho har Janam Tera bhaii hi rehne ki khwaish hai,
Tujhse Sundar koi nhi Tere paero me bss swarg hai aur isi me rehne ki farmaish hai,
Mai ruthu to bhi mana leti hai,
Vahi ek hai jo har rishte Khushi se nibha leti hai,
Teri udasi me kabhi akela mat samjhna apne aap ko,
Tera bhaii hai hamesha tere saath bss yaad kar lena is baat ko..In shabdo ki ahmiyat sirf unhe pata hai jinke pass behen nhi hai. God bless you all,stay happy and make everyone happy
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The wish I had for you to stay, I know I was wrong to keep your words for everyday,
Breaking the heart into pieces that's all you know,
I don't even know what did I do wrong to deserve this curse's flow,
People are just blabbering machine for me now, no one cares they just know how to use the words for their good and my fowl,
I got nothing to even blame others,cuz I am no different just a being like another,
I have my heart as a broken collection,it hurts even more to touch every piece just like a broken mirror with so much pain and need for ease,
I am getting what I deserve and I hope others get what they do,
Nothing matters seriously, everything that matters is me and myself,
To prepare my mind for such people, I have to be myself and stop thinking about other people,
The lesson with a hard path,to grow more and overcome the dark path,
Just a beauty of life with pretty emotions,have a wonderful time with lots of happiness and no bad imaginations....People come people go , that's just the way of life , we have to just overcome this unhealthy attachments.
Have a time you deserve
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@Hopeless1231 keep going brother
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@itachiSenpai
what r u thinking
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@Codyy Thinking made me anxious , so i stopped thinking
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I hope it hurts less,as time goes on,
I hope things get better as life moves on,
Understanding the feelings, accepting the memories,
U can bear it with the strength of your own will and daring,
Just having a hope of that something is left and it's coming,
I desire it's u again with no hurtful feeling,
But let the time do it's thing, it's better for both of us and having a peace in being,
I still just hope and will hope ,as time goes on things get better and atleast not like this broke....Just randomly saw a reel and wrote this ,I know it's not good I will try to do better ofc.
Well sure tell me your thoughts on this ,have fun and stay happy
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Wow
Nice
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@Rohitag aha im many things
glad u liked it !!
