What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
If you’d only let me
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@Wicked_
You have some depth to your words.
It did remind of a song I heard.
I would like to read some free form you make.So if you ever want to I would love to see some
Cornbread
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@Tim-Hamrick I have several posted here just check my profile and scroll through my posts you’ll see them
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@Lazz just lovely Lazz, when my daughter is old enough to bring boys home i hope it's someone like you
I'm not chasing anything, just jogging baby, what's your bag?
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@Wicked_ lump in throat, tear in eye
I'm not chasing anything, just jogging baby, what's your bag?
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@Scottish 👌😁
A little foolishness, enough to enjoy life, and a little wisdom to avoid the errors, that will do.
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