Fish-- another random poem
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A fish
I wanna be a fish.
I wanna learn to swim
and not be afraid of drowning.
I wanna dip my face in the water,
stay there for hours,
perhaps days, and no one will know
that salty tears and salty water
are a good combination.
I wanna exhibit a talent.
I wanna show how flopping fins
is nothing but art.
I wanna know if I’ve made them happy
if I become a fish
that is not lazy, eyes always open
and never stops moving.
I hope I was a fish. -
@Gia28 I have a poem about stars..... I hope you will like it..
Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
How I wonder what you are
Once you know what you you are
Mental hospital is not so far 😂😂😂😂😂 -
@Gia28 I was just kidding , nice poem by the way 😂😂😂
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@Mickeyyyyy lmfao dude that is funny XD
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@Mickeyyyyy oh thank you! I don't even know if it's a poem or a rant 🤣
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@Gia28 i wish i could make poems as good as yours.........
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@Gia28 thats awesome
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@iamrahul thanks for the compliment. You can always create one. I'm not even a professional XD
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@iamrahul thank you XD
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@AllAboutGay this is cuuute XD love gays ❤️
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@Gia28 he's not actually gay lol
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@χανιєя then what is he? XD
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@Gia28 a troll
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@χανιєя are you two good friends? XD
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@Gia28
This reminded me of a silly poem back in my school days. It went:I wish I were a fish
Swimming in the sea
But a fish in a dish
I never wish to be.😂 Whoa I wish I knew how to swim too.
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@Ella-26 hahahah that is actually nice, ella! Funny too XD
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@Ella-26 now we have found some poem rivals....lol
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It's an interesting poem, I enjoyed it. There are few stark ironies that stick out to me. Never have I seen something more afraid of drowning than a fish, flailing about on dry land. And also how unremarkable most fish really are when next to another, not really displaying any talents to set them apart, literally in droves of like fish. How lucky I am to not be a fish, how much more I could be.
Anyway, just what I thought along with your thoughts. Nice poem.
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Haha. Yea indeed it was quite a funny poem.
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Haha. Nah, hers is an original. The one I got was from school. :D
Well don't be shy and drop some of yours so we all can read it.