Aye really great!
I agree with @US-poet that there are a few typos and things to patch up, but it sounds really good to me and I hope you keep on writing and sharing your poems Bored 😄
And yet again...I write
Spiders and spindles of dwindling bugs
Await the arrival from hundreads of buds
The flowers that bloom before ripening fruit
The sugary sweet juice-filled loot
That sweet peach or strawberry vine
Tasteful vegetation, line after line
Awaiting the day of a transforming fruit
The sugary sweet, juice-filled loot
Sweet cakes and snowflakes
Beautiful by design
Joyful strawberry vine
The aroma of baked cookies
The sugar and wheat
The families which meet
To love, laugh, share, and eat
To feast upon the sight of foods
To enjoy the time together
To enjoy the overzealous moods
To enjoy this day forever
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Now now now this is appetizing
It's a treat to read you, thanks for existence Sir!
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Why don't you get them published?!! All of your works inspire me to get back to writing! It's been years but still I reminisce those days
Aw, that'd be cool.
I'm afraid I'm not confident enough to invest the money into it.
And I'd have to market it and sell it to whomever to make a profit.
@ʙᴀʙᴀᴊɪ_ but you should def. try it out! I'd love to see any of your works.