What Went Wrong?



  • What went wrong?
    I ask myself every day.
    I loved you.
    I cared for you.
    I loved you.
    I was blind, to who you were.
    I wanted to feel loved. I wanted to be happy
    I thought you could do it.
    But it finds out..........
    it was just a trap I wasn't ready to leave.


  • Freedom Writers - Writing

    @hales17 said in What Went Wrong?:

    What went wrong?
    I ask myself every day.
    I loved you.
    I cared for you.
    I loved you.
    I was blind, to who you were.
    I wanted to feel loved. I wanted to be happy
    I thought you could do it.
    But it finds out..........
    it was just a trap I wasn't ready to leave.

    Give me a minute to compose myself
    It's been long, long time since you've been gone
    I can still remember conversations we had
    Too bad that's all that now lingers on
    So many times I nearly fooled myself
    That somebody like you could give a damn about me
    But then one day you stepped into my life
    All my strife was a fleeting memory

    Over and over in my head at night (What went wrong…)
    Didn't lose the battle, didn't give up the fight (What went wrong…)
    To let you go then didn't make things right (What went wrong…)
    Can't hide the tears from my eyes
    Now that love's gone and passed me by

    Bearing my life I somehow steered you wrong
    From the road once again was driving us away
    I pushed aside the things that meant so much
    With the hope that you'd be happy someday
    I wear regret now like the lines on my face
    Not a day passes on that you don't cross my mind (You don't cross my mind…)
    Couldn't raise the spirits of the broken hearted
    Chance presents itself what'd you do in kind

    Over and over in my head at night (What went wrong…)
    Didn't lose the battle, didn't give up the fight (What went wrong…)
    To let you go then didn't make things right (What went wrong…)
    Can't hide the tears from my eyes
    Now that love's gone and passed me by

    Can't hide the tears from my eyes
    Now that love's gone and passed me…

    But then one day I gathered up the nerve
    To dream all of those ways I thought not to cross
    In for this pain that flow deep down inside
    That still has the dreams that always know loss
    Upon the threshold I now made my ascent
    Towards the door I sure closed on one careless day (On one careless day…)
    Written on the ledge, just passed, I bother let in
    That your name, long gone, it faded away

    Over and over in my head at night (What went wrong…)
    Didn't lose the battle, didn't give up the fight (What went wrong…)
    To let you go then didn't make things right (What went wrong…)
    What went wrong…
    Can't hide the tears from my eyes now that love's gone and passed me…
    Love's gone
    Love's gone
    Love's gone
    Now that love's gone and passed me by
    (ect.)


  • Freedom Writers - Writing

    @kat_15 said in What Went Wrong?:

    @giant-panda Neeraj, I never said anything about your job. All i said was that you got that off the internet. You also got the post that I’m replying to off the internet

    @Kat_15 U thinking so ..........
    Assume that the English language has a vocabulary of 1000 words, which is really much smaller than it should be. The probability that you didn't copy from the Internet is

    The math will show you the probability that you would write exactly the same words that someone else did without copying. The chance is very small. For a ten-word sentence, the probability that you didn't plagiarize would be about 0.000000000001%.
    Haha .........
    ..
    .


  • Freedom Writers - Writing

    @hales17 said in What Went Wrong?:

    @giant-panda May I post this to my page? I will give you credit
    its amazing and should be shared

    @Hales17 Nice , You want credit me, but used my work in it’s entirety. Really, you used my name and likeness to draw readers to this post


  • Freedom Writers - Writing

    @kat_15 said in What Went Wrong?:

    @giant-panda This isn’t your work. It’s a song

    Work, work, work, work, work, work
    You see me I be work, work, work, work, work, work
    You see me do me dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt, dirt
    There's something 'bout that work, work, work, work, work, work
    When you a gon' learn, learn, learn, learn, learn, learn
    Me na care if me tired, tired, tired, tired, tired, tired

    Join me I deserved it


  • Freedom Writers - Writing

    @kat_15 said in What Went Wrong?:

    @giant-panda It’s not your work.....

    @Kat_15 t’s not my job” has become a phrase commonly used in the workplace. But that doesn’t mean it should be. Sure, this attitude may help you avoid doing extra work, but it’ll probably also prevent you from advancing in your career since you’ll be labeled as someone unwilling to go above and beyond. Not to mention, it could also get you labeled as lazy and unaccommodating (say goodbye to your happy hour invite).

    But—hold the phone a second—just because I’m saying you shouldn’t make regular use of those four words doesn’t mean I think you should always say yes and automatically pick up the slack for others. What I am saying is that, rather than letting these words slip out of your mouth, you should learn how to say yes or no in a way that works for both parties involved.



  • @giant-panda May I post this to my page? I will give you credit
    its amazing and should be shared



  • @kat_15 said in What Went Wrong?:

    @giant-panda It’s not your work.....

    I though it was Rhianna lyrics lol


  • Music Lovers Global Moderator

    @giant-panda Neeraj, I never said anything about your job. All i said was that you got that off the internet. You also got the post that I’m replying to off the internet



  • @hales17 you said about writing a book....
    The early extracts are fab .... i soooo can't wait till your finished 😄


  • Music Lovers Global Moderator

    @hales17 I think that’s the song “what went wrong”


  • Music Lovers Global Moderator

    @giant-panda This isn’t your work. It’s a song


  • Music Lovers Global Moderator

    @giant-panda It’s not your work.....


  • Soul Searchers

    @hales17 that's why it's called dating, love the process?!😉


  • Music Lovers Global Moderator

    @giant-panda Tf? You got that off the internet too?! Smh


 

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