Hmm. Good prose, good tempo. No skips no stumbles. Was this way as it was first imagined? If True you got me beat! What was the thought behind "leave these beautiful people " what are beautiful people?
@its-bobby USA, definitely. For one, It's far away, the other side of the globe. I'm not good with long flights at all. And from what i've heard, visiting The States doesn't sound too safe either. Maybe i'm just paranoid, idk