Hungry for love

[US poet]

My body has formed a new type of appetite,
and that's to feast upon the love you've given me,
from which I'll eat every last bite,
as I'll fight for the next morsel,
eating at your brothel,
of lust and passion,
I'll come back for seconds without even asking.
I've only gotten a fraction,
of what's in store,
and I can't help but want more,
because I'm ravenous for another way to adore.
If any of you was taken away I'd suffer malnutrition,
my diet must consist of you my delicious fixation,
as I take time for the gestation,
of the dopamine you've given me,
and one guarantee,
is that the starvation,
will never come to fruition,
as long as we're yearning,
and serving,
the other our favorite dish,
there will be no contest,
that this love that's been expressed,
feels as if it's been blessed,
before we've dove in,
to begin,
our feast.
You've awoken the beast,
of tenderness,
with a fondness,
for your flesh.
This craving is never ending,
as you've given me a new meal to covet,
that's enough to fill my gullet,
a dinner always within my budget,
and as the banquet goes on,
you're the one meal that'll tear me apart once you're gone.

[ODIN]

@us-poet woah thats awesome!!!!

[US poet]

@ragnar thank you.

[anup123]

Its aggressively romantic...
but the last line spoiled the mood 😔 ,its just my thought. Otherwise its too awesome creation.

[US poet]

@anup123 I appreciate the feedback, I usually let the poems take me wherever they want to go, and that's how it decided to end, and I try to not fight it. I see what you're saying though.

[anup123]

@us-poet - that's cool. That's why its so beautiful.

[ODIN]

@us-poet said in Hungry for love:

@ragnar thank you.
and I'd post a gif, but apparently I don't know how to.

Watch tutorial here

[ODIN]

@us-poet i make poems too :) but damn this is awesome

[US poet]

@ragnar thank you. Hahah I saw myself in the tutorial. I fixed my comment.

[US poet]

@ragnar I'd love to check out your stuff too.