@Peek_A_Boom funny. no seriously, give it a read if u would like!
Restart, reheart
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Here we are again
Just how much more till then?
Burning to the soul like an old wish
How it churns to a coal in vain
Nothing but the everlasting pain
What more could you bring from this hell?
Coursing through all of my cells
So I could keep trying
Feels like I’m not dying
Cause I just had enough of crying
To the lies that I kept on buying
You ain’t gonna win
Not either lose
We’ll just finish at the start
Like when we still had the heart
You ain’t getting rid of me
So let’s just see
If ya slam that door
You won’t see me no more
So do one thing
That I ask to bring
Is no more tears
All out of fears
But to the end it’s ok to cry
Just don’t say goodbye -
OMG IT IS AMAZING
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@rabbitboy anytime. It's ok to take more time on it if you need too. No need to rush anything. Sometimes I'll take 3 or 4 drafts to finish stuff, but on average I take about 15 minutes. Keep up the good work.
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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@rabbitboy NICEEEEE! You’re writing poetry too? Wow!
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@kat_15 ehh kinda when I feel like it or inspiration hits me
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@rabbitboy me too. I'm inspired daily though.
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@rabbitboy Awesome 👏🏻
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@kat_15 thank you katie it means a lot to be recognized
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@rabbitboy Anytime 😊
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@us-poet That’s really good!
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@rabbitboy I like it. It had a great end, was a bit rough, but it gets the point across. Good job. I appreciate you sharing this.
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@us-poet thanks for your feedback yeah it’s a little rough I mean I wrote it in about 5 mins but just seeing people appreciate it or comment on it brings a smile to my face
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Thats a beautiful poem
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@us-poet yeah don’t expect me to just rain poetry upon the public we have you for that
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@rabbitboy haha you're welcome.
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@girlnextdoor i tried to send u a message but your privacy didnt allow me. can u talk to me