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So, Here's my poem!
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So, this is for the first time ever I am writing a self-written poem here! Believe me, @US-poet inspired me to share one! She is an amazing poet and since I can't write as beautiful as hers, here's the best I came up with!
If you know me, you know that I am obsessed with Pegasus :)
This poem is dedicated to my Pegasus (when I Will have one in future because THEY ARE LOVE)
I'm really nervous since I had never shared my poems to anyone except my parents!
sighs
Alright, I talk too much...
so here it goesI should have been known
the moment you flew away
I would have been known
when you blew it with a neighI love you more than as a pet
since I grabbed you as we met
Now, I see you as my jet
but wait, we haven't finished yetI first saw you in the light
the light was too bright
I love holding you tight
my sweet little pegasus whiteIf my dad had ever found you
He would rebuke the princess
But he wouldn't mind you
If you proved him in lessI will never force you
To do things for me
I will never get a source
to tie on the strings for meNo one knows that
you have a dragon inside
every day your voice grows
you are a wagon insideYou have soft and sensitive features
would never think of you using as a leather
everyone saw you as a hater
I don't care, we promised to stay togetherWhen we hear an attack in the castle
getting cracks on the passel
this time, with a nice bite of trouble
together well fight with a blow of our bubbleI peeked on you behind that tree
and you were shining in the daylight
I freaked when you were behind me
we were surrounded by the black nightI couldn't imagine myself on a flight
Sitting on your back getting myself excite
hoping that I will be alright
keeping my lungs airtightWe flew higher and higher
I was in a gleam
and then I saw a ball of fire
of course, I was in a dreamI know, it's a pretty long poem and the fact that there are so many grammatical mistakes!
I guess in a poem, in order to make things rhyme, sometimes you gotta ignore these mistakes... so...Please tell me how it is and how you feel about it! Especially you @US-poet
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@dangerouswoman I like the sing song nature of it, and it was a great ride that I'd take again. The only thing I would edit out it the parenthesis, as it takes you out of the poem and is not needed. If you need an explanation like that make it apart of the poem, but it's unnecessary. Keep up the good work and keep on sharing.
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@DangerousWoman I Have Seen Many People In Here
Talking On Shitty Can't Say Shitty But Ya Random Discussion
But This Was Something New Thing In D House! 🤗
Talking About The Main Content i.e Poem
That Was Incredible! 👍👌
Beautiful Kinda Touching Lines!
Damn Cool
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@us-poet OH!! I get it. I should work on that!
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@bugsbunny Really?! I thank you soooooo much!! I just can't express how happy I am to know that!!!
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@dangerouswoman Appreciation For A Good Content is Necessary
I Really Enjoy This Thing
In Such A Place
This Shows Your Dedication!
Going Good Ya!
Enjoy Spread Love!
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@dangerouswoman good edit and great job. It's very charming. I like your style.
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@bugsbunny YOU ARE SO SWEET :D
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This is written beautifully. especially part where u described about fighting together. that part bought a smile. Keep it up.Its not at all a lengthy poem, I felt like u woke up a bit early or we could have seen some more interesting events. Keep on posting !
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@DangerousWoman Bugs Bunny here!
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@dangerouswoman That’s really, really good!!!!!!!! You should write more poems!
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@kat_15 Thank you sooo much
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@anup123 Aww! You really made my day by saying that... :)
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@Dangerous-Woman awesome!!
Keep writing and posting 👍🏻
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@nik-sub-blz Thank you sooo much :D
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@Dangerous-Woman Well written :)
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@sup Aw! Thank you soooooo much :D