HEY I WRITE A POEM FIRST TIMER warning its meh and im doing better now so respect my words of wisdom------i hope USPOET is impressed........praying to god for that

[WEED]

@RAGNAR @US-poet @KorgLife17 @Evan-Elderson @sup @FEDO @WtfJudith @Stranger_Danger
@Rabbitboy @layla @DramaQueen @Zeus-_ @ChristopherNolan @WilliamShakespeare ENJOY reading this

Where do we stand
Where do we go
Once we know all answers
to each other.
we will find each other once more
to have you in my arms
and to hold you close.
it makes me know how to love once more
to loose the love it
will break my heart and
kill my soul.
what we have you'll decide
to complete the task
you will learn how we think
I know to love once
might be easy but them hard
then to have the knowledge
and strength you'll find my
weakness to my heart.
Tina, you all these to have me
like you do.
I would never play you
I would never get angry
and never feel pain while I'm with you
the feeling I have I can't explain
their is no words to let and no sight to see
only what you could feel
when you do say the word
the word everyone is scared of.
to say the word you must have
strength and courage
to no the person they must tell you
there dreams and there fears.
to see them cry, to see them happy
to see them love you.
but you must know and to see
if they really know how to love.

[ODIN]

@im-bored well im impressed

[Steve Roger]

You have good sense of poetry 👍
Perfect for bye
🙏 Thanks

[WEED]

@steve-roger farewell my brother thanks for being a friend
goodbye

[sup]

ITS FANTABULOUS

I cannot write like you guys.

[US poet]

@im-bored

There are some typos, and a few places that I had to reread a few times to understand what you where trying to say, but I like the overall message, and what you where trying to say. It's really good for a first poem.

[WtfJudith]

Aye really great!
I agree with @US-poet that there are a few typos and things to patch up, but it sounds really good to me and I hope you keep on writing and sharing your poems Bored 😄

[Stranger_Danger]

Exceelently done ...i'm impressed.

[apples-n-kisses]

i think i'm in love

[___]

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[I.Queen]

@im-bored

Amazing, simply amazing.

smh, I don't know how to upload gifs.