What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
Words that hit your heart πππ
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@im-a-bae yes maam what can i help you ππ
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@polyprincess92
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@ragnar I SWEAR πππ YOU KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA MAKE ANOTHER TOPIC ABOUT YOU JUST WAIT
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@RAGNAR @im-a-bae
BEST; COUPLE; EVER!!!
You 2 are so so so so SO CUTE!
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@polyprincess92
You know it gurl!
Btw, sorry for being rude and get in the topic like that, I did read the poem, you should post the darker ones, those are my favorites! -
@im-a-bae go die bish rot in hell, i hate you, DONT YOU DARE!!!
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There is a VERY thin line between love and hate :wink:
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@mr-h ππ seriously bruh we should annoy this gurl cmon
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@ragnar @im-a-bae
Why should I annoy the girl if I can annoy the couple?! :rolling_on_the_floor_laughing:
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@mr-h said in Words that hit your heart πππ:
@ragnar @im-a-bae
Why should I annoy the girl if I can annoy the couple?! :rolling_on_the_floor_laughing:
Damnit ππ
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It's better then being a forever alone :wink:
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@ragnar said in Words that hit your heart πππ:
And you have another disease, it's called plagiarism
https://chatrooms.talkwithstranger.com/post/129907 -
@shutup seriously?? πππ
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@mr-h yeh, i am alone too but i have @im-a-bae to annoy ππ, i love her thou π she is cute and annoying and stubborn, and....and... everyone believes we are couples lmao.
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If you have her, even if it's just to annoy her, then you aren't forever alone :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
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@ragnar said in Words that hit your heart πππ:
@im-a-bae go die bish rot in hell, i hate you, DONT YOU DARE!!!
And I love you too babe ππ
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@mr-h said in Words that hit your heart πππ:
@ragnar @im-a-bae
Why should I annoy the girl if I can annoy the couple?! :rolling_on_the_floor_laughing:
I'm your crush remember like dang ππ