Posts made by Tim Hamrick

Here I am in the darkest of places.
I stand all alone as Im feeling these places.

I thought the darkness had left for the light.
Its mere presence often feels me with delight.

Wait how could this be?
In the light my darkness, she found me.

So yes my dance with darkness goes on.
The darkness will never leave me alone.

I embrace it, I caress it, I hold it so near.

With this great romance.
How can the end ever be here.

So we float on a sky of pillows so gray.
As the bones of dolls carry us away.

Aww; To be near you my darkness;your love is so clear.

O my love I shutter to think of the light
And those poor souls who live in its
frieght.

Always missing the the paleness of moon light.Living with thier disgraces.Never able
to hide their Crumbling Faces.

@Wicked_

Wow
"Speachless

@Wicked_
You have some depth to your words.
It did remind of a song I heard.
I would like to read some free form you make.

So if you ever want to I would love to see some

@kitkattohelp

Who was the best Batman

You know lots of great ones you all.
For me beauty is when she dances or is having fun. And her eyes cause you to smile. Or how she does her hair. But most beautiful of is those days when . Purpose,words,beauty,lust are not used or needed. As both relax on the edge of waters banks. They in each other's arms.
Are still with the water. No thinking no worrying or greed or need. And in that moment that is endless for them. They feel each other's heart beats.Stay in rythyme with the heart beats of the universe

@Cosmic_Lady

I read this 4 times. I had a ton of outer destractions. My friends tv was blairng
He was sad and there was something about
this passage you wrote that took me to a stand still. I handled my buddy's depression best I could. And then another friend texted. And I noticed. I was being humble great full and honest like someone that is greatfull.
Something bout how you write that gets in and I
go with it. But I never do that and it seemed
like with the last read of your words. I could not deconstruct and did not want to at the same time. I did not search for a hidden meanningfull as nothing was hideing. I just let it be as it is. And allowed myself to go apon a journey.
A literary leap of faith. Beautiful in it's honestly. And that of art hung in the universe's heart. Bravo

@Cosmic_Lady

Backdrop: a man in love with a woman who's eye's are of a way like sunset apon the mederatanin sea. She is beauty unbehold.
He's love for her dangerous as it has no conditions.

Woman:sad standing apon a ledge.Turn
because her beauty forsakes her. She feels will any man ever truly love her. Is she not more then just desire? Will her soul never know true love.

O to be it.' Thin fair maiden.I am not so blind as not to see your bruised heart.And your shield be but a thin spread to mine eyes.Hide from me not. Thus ye think i as to enter as such is the tale.O' to say i would not if welcomed to.Would make the greatest liar of me or any man. But i atest sweet dove, if one flower should find not a drop of rain that which is so loved by the flower.Would it be as the rain returns drinkest not the flower but stay closed.I seek only but the honor of thins heart beholder, such are things of beauty to man, the brusied heart, can liest only with a maiden of the sweetest love.hurt like that of the flower that opens not for the new rain.I am but a humble man seeking not the hearts soul but its beholders beauty, which intwain be my heart.Captivaded by her splinder, thin smile like a ray of the smallest light, in mine darkest days.Takest not mine light sweet dove, for i cheerish it must.

@Wicked_

I must admit this really gets better and better with each read. I just love the way you did it.

Its a beautiful cold. And it attacks the the inner self. Like a mirror image ying and yang.

With calculated turns and twists bravo..

@Cosmic_Lady

That one play I can not help myself.I value a person of such depth opinions very much so.Ill do some editing after work today and then send. I have a poem though. I do not share it.
But today I shall. This one was real it is a peace of me. I hope you enjoy its honestly and how it paints the picture of me and my life's tragic mistakes.
It has been so very long.
Since you have been gone.

           Your Goodbye

Do I ever cross your mind?
When your looking up at the sky.

Like a sunken ship at the bottom of the sea.
My memorey is berried to far to be.

When I last checked it was clear to see.
That in your heart there was no longer a memory called me.

Do not get me wrong.
I understand the reason of your why.

My heart knows the truth.
There will never be a goodbye.

I realized way to late.
The reason for this fate.

The us we where was only I.
I had hurt you and pushed you aside.

I was living my life through blinded eyes.
I lived from one hurt to the next lie.

I never even stoped to see why.
You where no longer by my side.

Fueled by hurt I always denied.
I left you in the distance now out of sight.

But my tank it finnaly runs dry.
And what I did to you I carry inside.

A true reminder of just why.
You never owed me.
Your Goodbye

I think God like good and evil are an artificial constructs. The ego is driven to find something to cling on to. Sacrifice your ego let go of everything and just be,so hard right cause letting go of what is not you means having no excuse. Or saftey net cause we all will die someday. So I ask before you exzisted where you dead. Where were you before you where created.So why fear what you already are. You came from nothing but apart of everything in this living being called the universe. We are so great and we all are apart of it. We are as we always have been. Drop the chains of your ego and reach mountains stars planets. By just being.

For me it's simple to answere . First when looking for a meanningfull replie. To a question that at best. Is a mix between a paradox and taking someone verbally hostage. With a hint of entrapment.
Define your terms please. Seems like you really phoned that one in. I mean no desrespect to any one. But during the middle ages churches where marrying young women off at 12yrs old. And all the respect in the world to the religious folk.
But Jesus said;I am not here for the righteous. So at best this is an old old cliché used during my generations time so on and so forth.
So how bout this I will start a new cliche.

Hope does not trickle down. It starts right at the bottom and grows upwards.
Change and hope must first start in our hearts and homes.And most importantly in the hearts of our children. So on election day this year. I am doing something meanningfull as well. While others go vote. I will be in my community. Giveing my town my people and my fellow Americans. As much help.As much as I can do. And put all my heart into what is needed. Helping an elderly person across the street. Fixing the monkey bars at our local school. Or leading one of my fellow Americans. G
past a substance or drug that has left them hopeless. An outcast for being human.
We all screw up time to time.
We are not self made people.
Everyone needs help.

So at the end of election day. I will be tired maybe even a few blisters sore and smilling
But I will have something to show for.

              God bless you my fellow Americans. And bless the people of this world who still hang on to hope.

@Cosmic_Lady
I did a ruff draft of a Shakespeare like short play.

I will post it for you you it's short .
And I never got around to editing it.

So take it easy on me. When I post I will set the backdrop for you. So it want be like it's coming from left field.

For me It have never been about the guns.
Before guns people had no problem killing others for what ever reason. So should people be banned.Banning guns at best slows down bad people a half step maybe.
Wasn't guns that did 911. So it's a slippery slope and is the start of tyrants.Only if the world banned fists could harm come to an end. But then no one could do good either.Look it makes no difference at all.
Simply put should all people that cause violence be banned? Of course not so it's a deeper questions if no guns no weapons. It was people that killed by gun or spear or rock they just are. We have to do our best and live while we can.

Cradle me O' cradle me the grave.
I love your claws, digging deeper in me.

Your eyes the devils delight.
You rip my flesh as we coincide.

Blood soaking rain falls on me.
As our evil starts to devour the sea.

A hurricane filled with all of our pain.
That beauty of yours like a sharp needle plunged deep in my veins.

That red love of ours thick, wicked and obscure.
We droped to our knees begging for more.

The needle junkies hum thier songs
of pain.Our love sending them to an early grave.

Dont worry baby, you tell me the same.
The lie I told you, is the lie you told me we're both to blame!

As we choke the life from each other.
One more evil, but not less then the other.

As with anything, as with all.
We must draw and end to our evil ball.

So we look around at this new death
we have found.Only ones left living are gaged and bound.

No it is not like us to leave witness's around.We just wanted others to suffer in, the beauty of the sweet sin that was abound.

As we dance with our demons rooted deep in the ground. Its apparent to all what, we have found.

A love so true and profound.
As we will live on forever, Sick, Twisted and Bound.

Can you let me know w what you think
It's called Sick Twisted And Bound

@F34 That sounds pretty cool.

@Scottish Bravo my good man!! "Good show"
I love the way you amazing folks are.
The way you texted that was poetic.
And your ability to take the reader written hostage. Muah magnificent I say.
Instead of hay look at me pretty lady that may live close. As us Americans would have,brutes I say we are. You where able to text with such grace. You eliminated not only the U.S. but the rest of Europe. Narrowing it down to just the U.K. And finally to you and this obviously married woman. I say long life to you govener.

@Tim-Hamrick I had a good reply to the Scottish guys comments. But I'll play nice I think he would have got a chuckle out of it.

@idk42069

Sure why not?

@emms-jane

It just really hit me. I live in a not so typicall American small town. Absolutely nothing changed here. No masks no one sick. Everybody just doing there thing. Litterly a mile away mask and people acting in a way. That made me feel very socially distant. But I too tend to be a loner often cause I just got that lets live why we can attitude.And believe it or not had more troubles from my smiles and unwavering hansom good looks lol.

I recently found myself not searching for enlightenment. But it happen out of chance.I have not way to explain. Other then it was beyond words or speach. The world everything became so like looking through a child's eye.
I didn't even know that was what my experience would be called. I am no better then any man or woman. Not a Buddhist either. It was just a self thing of wanting to know the truth about myself.
I wonder often but not very long. Why do people seek a gateless gate so to speak.When it already is.