DEPRESSION POEM ( THE FINAL VERSION )


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    DO YOU REMEMBER THIS OLD POEM I MADE??
    https://chatrooms.talkwithstranger.com/topic/18477/depression-long-poem-read-this-is-is-very-important

    WELL THIS ONE IS TOTALLY RE-WRITTEN BY THE MASTER @US-poet
    PERSONALLY I THINK THIS IS BETTER THAN MINES.

    DEPRESSION is a monkey curse that lives inside of me
    feeling so negative psychologically torturing and my emotions become lacking
    living on a reclusive island where nobody can reach me
    and Im still waiting here for new notifications
    the feeling of being defeated
    the feeling of hatred and im not healing

    DEPRESSION is like a pair of scissors ready to cut open my heart
    my hopes and happiness fade out like a light bulb that's burn't and fell apart
    do i have to sew it back together with needles and strings and use more than
    just a band aid?
    i dont have require perfection unlike my grandmother's crafted hands
    but its way too late for her she lived her longest elderly year met with death
    until her last breath and she been taken away
    and soon my soul and my body will follow
    and fall on the ground away from this sorrowful land

    DEPRESSION hits me at anytime and it's unexpected
    it causes all of my thoughts to be trembling and worrying
    but i stood there like a statue of King Lear
    and postponed to stop my troubling mind

    DEPRESSION is constantly testing my fate
    if i open up a notebook of my entire life i'd find written in the pages
    that i've been carrying my own weight
    the date is on top left corner of the page of my recorded days
    the time is on the right it pinpoints the memorable moments that i've spent

    my philosophy of the afterlife involves the choices that you've made
    that can last forever and the desires that you get that sometimes only
    last until midnight
    if you die in DEPRESSION and believe in the fibber
    you'll sell your notebook to hell and meet with Lucifer
    if you die in happiness and seek the truth
    you'll reach out to the heavens that are so bright
    and feel the heart of our lord Jesus Christ

    DEPRESSION is my second best friend
    in during a sweeping wind in the sky will you hold my hands until the end?
    in a lonely afternoon in Rome would you visit my home
    to see when i'm having a complete meltdown

    DEPRESSION can you kill me without pain or bleeding?
    one last thing before i say my final farewell
    will you write me a letter without giving me an excuse of you leaving?
    if someone receive my letter would you leave me?
    A brutish suicide expressing my wounded words
    and i hear lovely sounds of two or more bluebirds screaming
    DEPRESSION your're my Jack Daniels drowning myself in a poisonous sea!

    is it possible? an physical form of DEPRESSION holds a silver dagger
    can he at least kill me when I'm dreaming?

    original written by @IM-BORED re-written by @US-poet (thanks)








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