Hmm. Good prose, good tempo. No skips no stumbles. Was this way as it was first imagined? If True you got me beat! What was the thought behind "leave these beautiful people " what are beautiful people?
I've had a crush on the most special person in my life for almost 3yrs, still he doesn't reciprocate love or shows any interest towards me...And the worst part is, this year, he's gonna graduate😭😭😭
@wtfjudith i understand a lot of the feedback and dw i fixed the grammar mistake, my mic isn't working at the moment so i have to the mic built into my computer. thank you for the feedback its much appreciated. : )