Hmm. Good prose, good tempo. No skips no stumbles. Was this way as it was first imagined? If True you got me beat! What was the thought behind "leave these beautiful people " what are beautiful people?
@HmmmmWell, I'm a guy, so I don't refer to anything about myself as being "cute." I reserve that term for the girls. Also, I am perfectly sane (been tested) so nothing "crazy" about me, either.