This isn't as boring as it sounds, I promise!

[Eucalyptus]

Soooo, the other day in pub we were just making some random poems out of the back of our heads about what just went down in the chat.. And soo about 5 minutes Later, Linn just pops back in with this masterpiece!!

And now I had the genious idea to analyze it and hear different analysations of it! I think it's just a brilliant poem, and she didn't want to make the topic herself, so here goes:

'I didn't sing unless I had to. And I guess I've declined requests enough.
I'm aways holding back my voice. A scream perched on my tongue, and holding's tough.
I'd let it go into the sea. A sound booth can only hold so much.
An eighty decibel. I wonder what my throat feels to the touch.'

Poem by @linear writer and poet

I will analyse it in a comment below, please join in on the fun!!

[Eucalyptus]

I didn't sing unless I had to = I think singing stands for expressing yourself, so in this case, it seems like the poet surpresses her voice and maybe even feelings
And I've declined requests enough = People have tried to get closer and tried to find out the deepest thoughts
I'm always holding back my voice = holding back sounds like it has a deeper meaning, like the poet feels like it was expected of her that she surpresses her feelings and isn't too expressive about what is really going on inside her mind
A scream perched on my tongue, and holding's tough = But now something has happened that has made it extremely difficult to hold back
I'd let it go into the sea = the sea might stand for a safe place to express, the sea is so big and unknown and the roughness of the water will take along the expressed words.. Pubchat could be that place maybe, but that's just a reach.. It could also stand for a substance or an outlet in which she can express herself, like poetry..
A sound booth can only hold so much = the feelings and surpressed emotions feel overwhelming, as if it would just shatter a sound booth..
an eighty decibel = the amount of surpressed feelings are comparable to eighty decibel..
I wonder what my throat feels to the touch = after expressing what is inside, the throat would become harsh and sore, I am imagining a rough surface, that would otherwise be smooth... And it just gives the poem a bit of a crude touch..

I hope you like my analysation, it might be totally different. But this is the feelings I'm getting from it when I read it!

I like how cryptic this poem is! Well done!!! @linear

[[[global:former-user]]]

@Eucalyptus Ty for the post! Such a good poem and I am not capable of analyzing it. Amazing @linear

[Alireza.27]

@Eucalyptus oh god the poem was nice but i think your analyzation is as good. at the end she is the only one to verify it.

[Eucalyptus]

@Alireza-iran what if it's open for interpretation? You should give it a go!!

[Eucalyptus]

@Life-With-A-G8 What does this have to do with my topic? Make your own topic.... ?

[TheRisingSun]

Analyze
https://youtu.be/J53UK_bul5Y

[sup]

Poets are just lazy storytellers who are not capable enough to write actual stories with a plot and everything. They can also be defined as rappers who never made it in the industry because they were shit. Congrats @linear you're a lazy storyteller and a garbage rapper.

[Zxdfdcghjkl]

I thought a bit about what lazy is.
you must know more than me, don't you.
some gaming, growing man tits,
unreasonably elevated point of view.
ah, actually, you might be right: I am a garbage rapper.

[Eucalyptus]

@linear Lol, I like how you rhymed 'you' with 'view'.. Very original ...

[Eucalyptus]

@sup Is that your analysis of the poem?

[sup]

@Eucalyptus said in This isn't as boring as it sounds, I promise!:

@sup Is that your analysis of the poem?

Yes I tried :((

[Cold Sun]

@Eucalyptus said in This isn't as boring as it sounds, I promise!:

@linear Lol, I like how you rhymed 'you' with 'view'.. Very original ...

How do I look?

[Eucalyptus]

@Cold-Sun pretty ridiculous, since you can't even get the pictures in your profile centered..

And taking someone elses picture (especially when it is a personal picture, like in this case MY legs drawn by a friend) to set as your profile picture, without their consent, just seems a bit weird to me..

So I don't know what you're trying to say with this, but it's not a good look

[Cold Sun]

What a good feeling surviving my ass abused on a Sunday. You know, @Eucalyptus today I woke up with a mindset of tryin out some things I've never done before and the results haven't been all that astonishing and now with this, well you've also seen what it has led me into. So now allow now apologize for chosing you as a specimen for my foolish experiment. I greatly owe you for that even to panty pulldown point if you like. Pardon me on that but on the other side, I also want to extend my note of appreciation to you for such a peaceful feedback. Happy Sunday but I highly doubt if you went to church today.

[bye69]

@Cold-Sun such a troll dumbo..ill bang your ass

[Cold Sun]

@Eucalyptus And also, as far as this crazy*$$ profile's concerned, I don't really have any issues centering the pictures but I just chose to leave it at that. Not like it's my actual home and you're advising me as my wife. Ok honey I'll work on that. I appreciate the fact that you do have a good sense of organisation but anyway, thanks for dragging back my attention to that error.

[Cold Sun]

@Liliputian said in This isn't as boring as it sounds, I promise!:

@Cold-Sun such a troll dumbo..ill bang your ass

Anytime hehe:)) I changed my trollubator oil

[bye69]

@Eucalyptus ill scratch @linear 's throat

[Cold Sun]

@Eucalyptus said in This isn't as boring as it sounds, I promise!:

And taking someone elses picture (especially when it is a personal picture, like in this case MY legs drawn by a friend)

My apologies for that pliz and I really know it's totally awkward but allow me ask if your friend's from Thighland