@natarat16 sounds interesting, I'd also be interested in DM-ing if you wanna
I wrote this about 6months ago...
Injured mind says the doctor
Injured perspective said the greek
Skewed paradigms says the power
Skewed expectations says society
Whom do we trust to tell us we're broken
How should one determine if one is so
One man to another knocks an arrow
Made from injured bark of a tree, a willow
Made from life, a weapon
Bestowed upon us all
How should we use it?
To kill one another and fall
We are injured by design
Seperate yet powerful
Uniqueness comes with difference
Which then we chose to resign
How do we conclude
Knowing each one of us is broken?
Acceptance comes with greatness
And greatness comes from the mind
@Equinox critisism welcome
It has a beautiful meaning. I dont know much about poems actually I dont get usually their meaning, but urs is easier for me to understand and relate. I think in some parts It had lost the rhythm and song. But as I said I dont know much. Take this as an opinion from a very ordinary reader!! But I hope u continue writing and posting here. Im looking forward to ur poems from now
@Equinox It is a fine poem. I enjoyed it.
@Equinox It doesn't really make that much sense but it's still good.
@LovelyLueders thanks, I appreciate the feedback!
@Silhouette Thanks! I'm glad!
Just uploaded another if you'd like to check it out ;)
Again another epic one. How are you doing that Sir? :star: :star: :star: