Poetry - write your own.

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@kawaiiemo said in Poetry - write your own.:

@sup Why don't you translate a Indian poem for us so we can see how beautiful they are.

Lemme just correct you,
Indian is a nationality.
Hindi is the language.

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo actually, even if you take a particular language, there are loads of literature in it, so practically, you cant take out a single poem or even a book and understand its depth.... im not a pro in literature or poems, but thats that sayonara!

P.S.: my aunt's a tamil teacher so she said that to mehh :))

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo hey, for starters, you can read Bharathidasan... he's basically like William Wordsworth....

[sup]

@kakashi said in Poetry - write your own.:

Bharathidasan

That dude looks like charlie chaplin tho

[Kakashi]

@sup lol he was tryna make fun of Hitler at that time so yeah

[lostintrees]

Cool Thread! Thanks for the opportunity to share...
Intimate words from my scribbled pocket books...

Torn

When in night she shines bright as the morn,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
My cool winds surround where her body is warm

Intangible being that lies with your form,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To raise from within cravings yet to be born

From below you the tangles I have parted and shorn
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To be nearer to flesh and never forewarn

Through rooms that are locked, free spirits to soar
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To lurk among briars of desire forlorn

And find upon my head if unscorned
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn
The crown of your secret gently adorned

Flawed, scarred, tasseled ...and torn.

[Kakashi]

@lostintrees this piece is sooooo good, thank you so much for posting :))

[Kaho]

@firefly .
U made one lol,
Title
"I do not like poems a lot"

[Joshua Rowsell]

Walkin around, thinkin why am i so lost
but i realise, its like im born without a spot,
mudblood, im the one always forgot,
like my mother
sometimes i wish i were born white
i don't look like either side
so when young i used to lie
i didn't know the answer being questioned of my i-
DENTITY when kids would even threaten me when i was 5
never met my father, chose the worst instead of right,
i seen a photo, still ive never seen his face he doesnt smile,
they all say ive seen the worst as a child,
but i don't see it that way, im more grateful today,
14 i ran away, so i think its a quick pace,
the way i recover, i left behind a little brother,
a mother whos son wouldnt love her for a decade,
and still i blame myself, for losing a friend to a rope,
left behind his daughter n wife, with no note,
garuanteed, him and my son would be alive, if i didn't put my time,
in to people who will lie and make excuses all there life, so out of work,
and that is why, without the money no one loved me, so my heart i left behind
losing hope can take your life, so no more on will i rely,
i actually lft for one thing and that was suicide,
and my son hadnt even died,dissapearred over night, went to sydney, just for life,
and and now my losses i will cry, eventually, save it for future time,

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@KawaiiEmo I like them both