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I wrote a depressing lil' poem :>

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AutumnFyre
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I'm in this vicious cycle, see
The current pulling under me
I feel so numb and lost at sea

Sometimes in the ebbing tide
You can hear my lonely cry
Yet all the boats that come by
Leave me there alone to die

~~I hate myself so much for this~~

Some ships seem to understand
And come close with outstretched hand
But just to feel the wind and sand

The truth is, the fault is mine
I knew the dangers of the brine
But ships beyond the shoreline
Drew me in like fishing line

~~I hate myself so much for this~~

Kudos to you if you can guess what it means.
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DayShifter @AutumnFyre
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@justchatamy
I like this poem, comes from the heart... means a lot.
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AutumnFyre @DayShifter
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@mr_peanut Weren't you the person who interpreted this correctly back when I first wrote it?
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@justchatamy said in I wrote a depressing lil' poem :

@mr_peanut Weren't you the person who interpreted this correctly back when I first wrote it?

Ummmmmm . maaaaybeee lol
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shivers that is really good I didn't ever read a poem written in books but i have seen some in the internet like this and yours are in my top 5 list. u are everywhere i replied to few messages of yours in the movies category (stranger things). I can't write original poems but i can continue a poem so here is my cosmos but backwards

"SOMSOC"

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birds out there cages
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@Lost_Soul ur so sweet <33 thank u so much !!

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@Rohitag aha im many things
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