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As the Clock Tics By...
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As the clock ticks by, I can not help but to consider all of my previous emotions throughout my life.
As the clock ticks by, I begin to understand why my mother tried to raise me to be an independent young woman who does not focus on emotions.
As the clock ticks by, I watch the arms move so effortlessly without considering anything as an obstacle.
As the clock ticks by, I understand that the gentle arms could be considered or represented as multiple things.
As the clock ticks by, the first thing that appears in my mind is the arms representing something as simple as the structure of society.
As the clock ticks by, the arms moving carelessly, not minding any situation or problems around it.
As the clock ticks by, moving in such formation. I reconsider a different comparison; a comparison unlike the first one I imagine in my head with my emotions.
As the clock ticks by, slowly but steadily, my mind begins to wrap itself around the thought of the clocks motions representing what my goals should be like.
As the clock ticks by, the clock does not show one event of error as it continues its routine.
As the clock ticks by, the steady pace is untouched and is so strong but only focused of doing it's job in giving the time.
As the clock ticks by, I realize that my emotions are only controlled by myself as the movements of the arms are only controlled by the clock.
As the clock ticks by, I push away the past hours and look into the future minutes.
As the clock ticks by, I begin to steady my pace towards positivity as the clock moves steadily towards the next minute.
As the clock ticks by, realization comes passing through my mind. A realization that our society is moving too rapidly to stay fixated on the past.
As the clock ticks by, I realize I have become a stronger person just by considering that a simple clock has more meaning then to just tell the time.
As the clock ticks by, I comprehend completely that you can never go anywhere from looking to the past.~First poem /).(\
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Woah!!! Teach meeeee pleaseee
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@us-poet corrected!
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@ragnar your writing skills are already to good
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Damn this is super good Abbs!
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@us-poet thank you!π
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@boots22 thanks Handsomeeee
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@abby-83 good job, like a clock it has a repetitive nature and went through almost all aspects of a clock. One typo at the end, but that was it. A time piece, is what this is.
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@abby-83 As the clock ticks by, I comprehend completely that you can never go anywheres from looking to the past.
The word anywheres should be anywhere
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@abby-83 then you're perfect.