U know I find a lot of the things you post rather humorous, but to turn everything about Race is getting out of hand,Don’t get me wrong I’m from Chi-Town I have seen my fair share of social injustice as I have Many ,black friends that allow me to roll in parts of the city most white people wouldnt dear go but I also am the one who does all the driving as I’m less likely to get pulled over 😂🤣 I think ur objective is in the right place, but ur anger and hate fog ur judgement to truly make the change you seek we must all be on the same page & like it or not it’s gonna take the help and support of us white people 🤔
Another poem!!!! I dunno I'm bored :P
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This lacks proper structure and a form to be considered a poem. In fact it resembles a text of a rap song. Perhaps you should think of making lines between every verse, and not writing it as a one long sentence. I am not trying to be an asshole, but constructive criticism is the key to mastering any skill.
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@XxJadyBabyxX noice
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@XxJadyBabyxX Good One...😀
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@Charles-McPicle due u r mean
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@Charles-McPicle i hope u r happy now dude, u ruined my day 😭
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@Charles-McPicle oof dude
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@Charles-McPicle Hhaha that's what i was thinking 😂
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@XxJadyBabyxX I like it. You write what makes you feel better. If it helps you get things sorted then this has done its job. Doesn’t matter that it lacks this or that. Now if you want to work on structure and all dm me my lil bit. I’ll give you all the knowledge I have and guide you to the best of my abilities even though I myself am still a novice and am learning my craft.
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Good job.
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I support you.