@Lazz I can tell
Here’s a little something I wrote maybe two years ago in grade 8 :’)
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Through quick, few steps and some thread and a needle, he knew already that their minds were much too feeble.
Wicked intentions awakening, he continued on with his blissful hastening.
Contempt in his ways, he was much too smart, he carved out the man’s still beating heart.
Screams of agony filled his ears, he relished in the man’s bleeding tears.
Such pretty glass eyes, so fearful and lonely,
but different from his former ones of monotony.Prodding through flesh and bone, his cries ceased but lingered all alone.
Eyes wandering overhead to the pretty, decorated, dome, the man’s prodding tools continued to roam.
He had ventured there on a decree, but was met with the last sight he’d ever see.
A shaky last breath as the life left his eyes, he regretted never saying his goodbyes.
Setting the hooks and braces throughout his arms and hands, as if re-animated, he started to dance.#
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Nope, but that’s a really good guess!! Its a little bit more literal. There are certain keywords that kind of give it away, and the last line is basically the most important.
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@astral-baby said in Here’s a little something I wrote maybe two years ago in grade 8 :’):
the last line is basically the most important.
Is it something about frankenstein? :sweat_smile:
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@astral-baby you definitely have talant! It was descriptive and had me visualizing it you are very skillful keep it up!
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This reads like a heart-transplant. But a very cruel one. Without any anesthesia.
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@astral-baby nice nice.. I hope you didn't copy this anywhere. Haha jk. Well, it's like a poem by a vodoo doll. Haha
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@Lurker Ooh, good guess but nope!! Not quite literally re-animating the dead, but they are moving.
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@Quinn-Coffelt Aweee thank you so much~ ☺️💞
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@Karina-Kara Hehe, well it’s cruel for sure. It’s not a heart transplant, but that’s a real good guess!! More like the heart wasn’t needed tbh, or at least for what the “artist” in this envisioned.
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@cjko Haha, I wrote this a while back during a period of time when I would make riddles in my head about everything tbh, but thanks :’)) and ooh, I might have one about voodoo dolls :0
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@astral-baby said in Here’s a little something I wrote maybe two years ago in grade 8 :’):
@Lurker Ooh, good guess but nope!! Not quite literally re-animating the dead, but they are moving.
Either way it sounds dark and whack, I love it :blush:
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@astral-baby moonie,Im looking forward about a voodoo poem, i will love it for sure..
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Ohhh!Heartlessness, what a nice topic. And a very familiar one.
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@astral-baby oooh. I miss answering the riddles here.. I used to make a topic about riddles. And it's really fun. Hmm keep up the good work! You can share to us your riddles if you like
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@Bela-Hella Awe haha, I’ll be sure to work on one then😎❤️
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@Karina-Kara Hehe, I’m sure we can all relate to some extent- but certainly, hopefully, not this way.
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@cjko Awe riddles are tons of fun, aren’t they? If you’d like to, you should maybe continue with creating riddle topics! And thank you, I just might :) ❤️
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@astral-baby yeah indeed. Sure, I'll continue it.. :)
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@cjko Awe that’s wonderful to hear!! I’ll be sure to check some of em out~ 😊💕
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@Brain-Yam Awe haha, thank you- you’re the one who dragged me back after all, smh 🙄❤️