@xoyee sorry in advance, i just make myself happy without disturb other so if someone was discomfort with my action then i prefer to shush.. :-)
Godbye for this separation, i gotta left
Aye really great!
I agree with @US-poet that there are a few typos and things to patch up, but it sounds really good to me and I hope you keep on writing and sharing your poems Bored 😄
