@xo-pinkpillow-ox Nice one :)
Honest Feedback Only
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Hi, I just released a new song on SoundCloud and I was wondering if I could get some honest feedback or essentially your opinion on it?
https://soundcloud.com/sad-phantom-89173394/dark-side-of-the-moon-prod-redmosk
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@Sad-Phantom Still work to be done, but I liked it, might save it. Sounds a bit like Arctic Monkeys, I listen to them, one of my favorite bands I listen to.
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@Vlad20 Thanks so much for the feedback, I'm really glad you like it. Are there any specifics that u think I should change in future songs?
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@Sad-Phantom Probably be more creative in lyrics. And sometimes feels like you are being shy at some moments making your voice a bit off. But I am not sure, maybe its just me being weird. Anyway, just do what you feel and don’t be afraid to do it. You are doing good, keep it up.
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@Vlad20 maybe your right, haha, and Yeah thanks I definitely will
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@Sad-Phantom you really blew me away with your talent the song is straight fire it is also super cute! keep up the good work my dude.
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@Sad-Phantom “if you were a garden i’d want to be planted in you” that was smooth 😳. but i liked the song, keep up the good work. i’m definitely saving it to my library ^.^
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I FUCKING LOVE IT THAT IS SOME GOOD SHIT RIGHT THERE
okay but for real, from someone who writes, breathes, eats, and sleeps music: your vocals are a bit quiet, besides the parts that are meant to be in the background. you're a bit shy, but considering that this (i'm guessing) isn't after years of experience, it's really good. despite what other people are saying, i love the lyrics. this isn't mainstream, but it's much more...genuine that way. love the guitar and the background vocals -
Okay so I went back on your profile bc I heard a lot of potential in that song, so I love a few, like Mud, Sun Bloomed, and Broken. you've got a lot of potential, and looking back, you've been at this for 2 years?? Good job, man.
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Niiiiiice. My only recommendation would be to make the vocals volume a little lower, then it's pretty cool. Congrats