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[Gorlwithanime]

I'm in a story,, though its original I included small details from Maximum Ride, Maleficent, Cerberus, Hell Boy, and Avatar. Most details I added were characters and features of me and the lover within the story, but some were of luminous scenery and personality traits of my character to help create something that acted like me in a fictional world
feel free to leave suggestions to things that would be interesting to add

[faA]

Going off of the limited information you shared, I think it would be interesting if you gave the point of view from the villain's/antagonist's side and justified it. Most things in life are never black or white.

[Gorlwithanime]

more description: a princess who was one of light met that of darkness and became one, changing her form into that of a Hatuibwari (human dragon) with black wings as she fell in love with him, creating a bond and casting imagination into play in romantic ways. This takes place first at her kingdom of white marble then she leaves to his of a tall black kingdom covered in vines. he shows kindness like the beast to her beauty and the insects seemed to be magical like in avatar. its a dance on the meaning of light and darkness @AAfro

[faA]

Ahh. In that case, how does the kingdom and it's people feel/think about their princess being whisked away by the the black prince? Does the back princes kingdom and it's people and enviroment except the princess of light for who she is. She is after all a light in a dark world and creatures of the dark would be drawn to light; like a moth to a flame.
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[Foetica]

@Gorlwithanime I like the idea and the imagery thus far but for me to make sugggestion I’d need to see more plot arc setting back history everything then I can see about setting my mind into what you’ve built and cast about seeing what’s there and what’s not. As a fellow writer I’d love to help but also I don’t want to change what is your story.

[A Former User]

I don’t know much about this stuff, so forgive the comment if it’s total rubbish.
I like the image very much, especially the dark side. It’s almost disturbing enough. But the bright side, especially her face is lacking depth. It’s too slick in a sense. It would be great if your could include some sort of defect or something like that. It would make her truly beautiful in my humble and not at all expert opinion.
For the dark stuff, you have it nearly right, but for it to make me want to open the book, i’d need a bit of grunge into it. But that might not work at all of course.

Good luck with it :)

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[A Former User]

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[Foetica]

@Gorlwithanime it’s reminiscent of the creatures of dark fey aka the unseelie. Beautiful in their darkness as many are outcasts from the courts of light.