I wrote a song, but idk if it have grammar mistakes, can you catch any mistake, it will really be a great favor
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@mark-magdii.
"Ur the reason i am alive"
You are the reason I am alive"I am the one i am ur bird
I am ur sky i am ur third"Replace those "ur" with "your"
"So tell me where and when and why you had to let me there to die you had to know someone new pls go"
Replace "pls" with "please"
"So tell me why every time i cry I can't hear you voice replying i will be for you there i will be for you every where"
Replace "hear you voice" with "hear your voice"
That's all.
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