listen to this song and lemme know if you think i have talent?
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I feel so lost... please help me... :(
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You fuckin cussed a whole damn fucking lot
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Not really my type of music sorry, if you made the beat yourself then atleast i like that :)
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@chase-vaughan yea i probably should tone down a little haha
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Wonderful creation!..music reminds me of DSBM(Depressive Suicidal Black Metal)..lyrics are great too..if u replace the Auto-tune part with 'Death growl' it will go bat shit crazy in metal genre..thnx for sharing ua talent mate..keep it up!
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@alex-moody Don't take this is like hate, I'm only giving my opinion on some stuff :) Just keep grinding btw, it sounds good. I noticed that in most songs you are too strict and you follow beats too hard all the way up to the end of the verse. Beats and instrumentals are good, especially if you are the one making them btw, since its double job and extra time put in . In many of your songs, beat dictates speed of your raping, to be precise it dictates intensity of your raping, which affects your delivery. In song "15" it seems you control the beat, you control which part of instrumental will be let loose and you were more focused on lyrics than on beat, thats why I choose that song as best one. You've probably heard those, but try to focus and notice the difference between these 3 artists, how they deal with beats and how contents of their songs fit with their energy ,emotion, lyrics and delivery . They might sound similar, but there is a big difference between them. Of course, this is just my opinion as a listener btw, keep it up :D
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defiantly room for improvement but has good lyrics, good beat and is pretty impressive. fair play takes hard work to produce music. always wanted to but never had the courage to so fair play mate. I am your age and can relate to your lyrics bro. Mud is my favourite of all your tracks tho. keep making music brother.
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@what-is-this thank you so much for the honest feedback! ill try put it all to use!
I feel so lost... please help me... :(
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@m15-uk-talk im really glad you like it!
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@alex-moody No probs man, thanks for sharing your work and I hope to hear more as well, good luck
