Poetry - write your own.

[KawaiiEmo]

Hi everyone,

I wanted to start a poem thread that hits the feels for people.

Allow me to start with two of my own original works that I wrote today.
You can enhance the experience by listening to this song at the same time!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Y-hA-66ghs

Poem1
As I walk barefoot on the sand,
Shells sifted through my hands,
I held one to my ear,

A whisper then drew near,
“the heart of keys holds the way”
“and when turn at night keeps shadows at bay”

A web of clues, what does it convey?
Sounds like a world of wonder, shall I obey?
A web of thoughts, how can it be?
Is this singing shell, speaking to me?

Poem2
We lay in the greenery,
Covering each other,
With only the moon as our witness,
Blooming in the night sky and smiling upon us,

As the beaming moonlight lit up your celestial smile,
I look into your eyes which beamed a reflection,
I saw myself,
Warmed – not only by your touch,
But also, your soul.
xo

Please let me know know if you like them and how they make you feel. I might post more if they are received nicely so don't forget to follow. ^.^

Kind Regards
-KawaiiEmo

Edited Spelling Woopsies!

[sup]

ITS PURE GOLD.
BEAUTIFUL.

[KawaiiEmo]

@sup Ohh thank you so much you read through them really quickly. ^.^ I'm in the general chatroom right now if you want to have a little chat. Cya around!

PS: Glad you liked them. I'm really shy about sharing my literature, there is a saying that 'authors are naked'. Interesting huh? ^.^

[sup]

@kawaiiemo said in Poetry - write your own.:

@sup Ohh thank you so much you read through them really quickly. ^.^ I'm in the general chatroom right now if you want to have a little chat. Cya around!

PS: Glad you liked them. I'm really shy about sharing my literature, there is a saying that 'authors are naked'. Interesting huh? ^.^

DUDE no need to be shy..its truly good.
And theres no saying like that.
I dont approve

[KawaiiEmo]

@sup Your words are really encouraging, I'm lucky to have crossed a kind heart. ^.^ Oh and btw my name is Valencia.

[sup]

@kawaiiemo said in Poetry - write your own.:

I'm lucky to have crossed a kind heart

I sense sarcasm.

Oh and btw my name is Valencia

Thats what you dont do in threads.

[bye69]

@kawaiiemo i like the first one.

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo
This is a pretty old poem of mine, but warning: offensive content ahead XD
:::
Roses are red,
Battery is low:
Its now ded,
Your a hoe
:::
pls take it as humour

[Athena]

@kawaiiemo Wow girl, you've got a talent! Yeah, I suppose authors are naked because they bare their feelings, they have to expose themselves to achieve poetry. I hope you keep sharing your poems, they are really good.

[KawaiiEmo]

@athena Thank you for the support. ^.^

[sup]

@kakashi said in Poetry - write your own.:

@kawaiiemo
This is a pretty old poem of mine, but warning: offensive content ahead XD
:::
Roses are red,
Battery is low:
Its now ded,
Your a hoe
:::
pls take it as humour

Its so funny...i cant stop faking a laugh.

[KawaiiEmo]

@kakashi How do I view it? I'm new to the site and a bit lost this is day one after all. ^.^

[sup]

@kawaiiemo said in Poetry - write your own.:

@kakashi How do I view it? I'm new to the site and a bit lost this is day one after all. ^.^

just click on it.

MOD TO THE RESCUE.

[Kakashi]

@sup AWW thenkz you for da support
Edit: My name is P*******. You're welcome.

[KawaiiEmo]

@kakashi OMG that is kinda funny HAHA! But I'm so NOT a hoe! I'm too KAWAII for that! NICO NICO NIII!!

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo heyy it wasnt meant to you, i was merely letting the lowly mortals a slight glance of my other-worldly poetry skills

[bye69]

@kawaiiemo following kakashi's poem..

:::

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
If you're a pokemon
I'd picachu you

:::

[Kakashi]

@liliputian DIZ DAH REAL SHIT! lit emoji lit emoji

[Lurker]

@kawaiiemo

And we've got a new TWS poet! Amazing! Hope to see more from you!
Cheers and welcome to the site btw ^^

[KawaiiEmo]

@mr-h Naww thank you! Who was the previous one? I would love to read their work.