Poetry - write your own.

[KawaiiEmo]

Hi everyone,

I wanted to start a poem thread that hits the feels for people.

Allow me to start with two of my own original works that I wrote today.
You can enhance the experience by listening to this song at the same time!

Poem1
As I walk barefoot on the sand,
Shells sifted through my hands,
I held one to my ear,

A whisper then drew near,
“the heart of keys holds the way”
“and when turn at night keeps shadows at bay”

A web of clues, what does it convey?
Sounds like a world of wonder, shall I obey?
A web of thoughts, how can it be?
Is this singing shell, speaking to me?

Poem2
We lay in the greenery,
Covering each other,
With only the moon as our witness,
Blooming in the night sky and smiling upon us,

As the beaming moonlight lit up your celestial smile,
I look into your eyes which beamed a reflection,
I saw myself,
Warmed – not only by your touch,
But also, your soul.
xo

Please let me know know if you like them and how they make you feel. I might post more if they are received nicely so don't forget to follow. ^.^

Kind Regards
-KawaiiEmo

Edited Spelling Woopsies!

[Firefly]

I do not like poems a lot.

In fact, I strongly dislike them.

I would rather make a robot.

I really wish poems go rot.

Poems are something I condemn.

I do not like poems a lot.

I want poems tied in a knot.

Poems should go and take a swim.

I would rather make a robot.

I don’t want poems to be taught.

It’s easier to study chem.

I do not like poems a lot.

They should be boiled in a pot.

It’s easier to find a gem.

I would rather make a robot.

Poems are vile; they should be caught.

I hate studying a poem.

I do not like poems a lot.

I would rather make a robot.

[lostintrees]

Cool Thread! Thanks for the opportunity to share...
Intimate words from my scribbled pocket books...

Torn

When in night she shines bright as the morn,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
My cool winds surround where her body is warm

Intangible being that lies with your form,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To raise from within cravings yet to be born

From below you the tangles I have parted and shorn
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To be nearer to flesh and never forewarn

Through rooms that are locked, free spirits to soar
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To lurk among briars of desire forlorn

And find upon my head if unscorned
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn
The crown of your secret gently adorned

Flawed, scarred, tasseled ...and torn.

[KawaiiEmo]

@sup Ohh thank you so much you read through them really quickly. ^.^ I'm in the general chatroom right now if you want to have a little chat. Cya around!

PS: Glad you liked them. <3 I'm really shy about sharing my literature, there is a saying that 'authors are naked'. Interesting huh? ^.^

[Athena]

@kawaiiemo Wow girl, you've got a talent! Yeah, I suppose authors are naked because they bare their feelings, they have to expose themselves to achieve poetry. I hope you keep sharing your poems, they are really good.

[sup]

@kawaiiemo said in Poetry - write your own.:

@kakashi How do I view it? I'm new to the site and a bit lost this is day one after all. ^.^

just click on it.

MOD TO THE RESCUE.

[bye69]

@kawaiiemo following kakashi's poem..

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[What is this]

@kawaiiemo Drop some biblical poetry on this

[Nickel34]

First meetings laced with fear of discovery.
Fear pushed aside for the sake of your embrace.
Let us meet in secret more than just today.
Soft lips like pillows are fringed with desire.
Sweet tongue searching for that heady drink.
Deft hands carry us to an isolated place.
Where pleasure not fear is our only company.
Let us meet in secret more than just today.

[KawaiiEmo]

@sup Your words are really encouraging, I'm lucky to have crossed a kind heart. ^.^ Oh and btw my name is Valencia.

[bye69]

@kawaiiemo i like the first one.

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo
This is a pretty old poem of mine, but warning: offensive content ahead XD

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pls take it as humour

[KawaiiEmo]

@athena Thank you for the support. ^.^

[sup]

@kakashi said in Poetry - write your own.:

@kawaiiemo
This is a pretty old poem of mine, but warning: offensive content ahead XD

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pls take it as humour

Its so funny...i cant stop faking a laugh.

[KawaiiEmo]

@kakashi How do I view it? I'm new to the site and a bit lost this is day one after all. ^.^

[Kakashi]

@sup AWW thenkz you for da support X)
Edit: My name is P*******. You're welcome.

[Kakashi]

@kawaiiemo heyy it wasnt meant to you, i was merely letting the lowly mortals a slight glance of my other-worldly poetry skills

[Lurker]

@kawaiiemo

And we've got a new TWS poet! Amazing! Hope to see more from you! :D
Cheers and welcome to the site btw ^^

[KawaiiEmo]

@mr-h Naww thank you! Who was the previous one? I would love to read their work. <3

[sup]

DID YOU KNOW?
@SUP prefers hindi poetry over english poetry.