What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
It was just a moment
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We were only together for a short time,
but soon I find,
we were having a pleasant back and forth,
you were worth,
the wait of getting to you.
I just want you to know don't feel blue,
my phone decided to refresh at the worst moment,
and I hope you enjoyed our time after my last comment.Everyone wants to ride the unicorn, but that doesn't mean I'll let you on.
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Well i hope u find them again : )
Walking through the thorns to get to u.
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@lazypotat We shall see.
Everyone wants to ride the unicorn, but that doesn't mean I'll let you on.
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bitchbehumble
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