@Sloth2099 hey, is there pm option here?
afterlife (poem)
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Open your eyes
See the bright blue skies
Founded yourself laying on green grass
You stand up and put your both feet on ground
It seems the long field
Stretched to the flat horizon
And the flowers are rising
And the sun is always color of golden yellow
A settle sound of silence
From the nature is so mysterious and profound
Took a closer look of the sky
And made of molten glass
A phantom of glory lies in your past
Living throughout life until your last
The pain and maximum marks of your fears
Doubtfuls anger and depression
In your notebook on your hands
Meeting at the deaths door
The griever in you asks for more
Neglected needs and negation commands
All of your negative energy and blind taughts
Dissolves away
Wish I something more deeply words to say
Then suddenly you see thousands of angels
With white furr wings
Some of them playing music through instruments
Some of them starting to sing
And you hear a sound of lullaby tunes before
Since when you're a baby in crib
Your eyes are begin to dazzling
As if your eyes are moving
And frozed at same time
My thoughts inside of my head to reverse wind
Your body become weightless like feathers
As leviatating up the air
Feeling the wind cool and warm eases your hair
Your notebook burned to ashes
Born again and regain happy
And so did your early damned dawn died
My destination is near reached at the heavens?No one knows the word of true really is
No one knows why they're lies always does
No one in the world don't understand the
Real meaning of truth
It's time to choose for your destiny
You want to believe everything don't care it's lie
Or dig yourself out of growing roots
Beneath the trees and start looking for truth.This is probably best written poem I've ever did
And I hope @US-poet will be impressed.
Note I'm still need to be improved. Oh well I get there in one day. -
Very nice poem ;)
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@sexychick123 thanks.............
Are you real? -
@im-bored
Is she ?
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@le0nard0 I dunno man
She's a catfish?????? -
@im-bored I wanna know the same 😁😁😁
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@le0nard0 yeah ikr 😆😆😅😅😆😅😅😉🤔🤔
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@im-bored browse around Tws .. Find yourself a bish, let alone the rest cuz you don't wanna end up with catfish 😁😁😁😁😄
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@evan-elderson thanks mate✌
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Well done mate!
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